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Harvest Winds

Reflection of life
Unclothe by the harvest winds
Autumn leaves are tears 

Edward J. Ebbs - October 22, 2015


Written for a Contest, Autumn Haiku
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Horne Avatar
January 2, 2016 at 2:57 PM
lovely
Bickerstaffe Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 2:36 PM
Extraordinary imagery and powerful language... perfect 575 HAIKU so well contrived! Well done!! Keith
A. Sharma Avatar
October 30, 2015 at 5:07 AM
What a beauty Edward, last line just perfect for the pic! Congrats on awesome win!
Dietrich Avatar
October 29, 2015 at 4:07 PM
a very interesting interpretation of the eye and linking it with the suffering of Christ. Congrats on your win, Edward.
Kendrick Avatar
October 29, 2015 at 12:24 PM
Uniquely penned.. I like the picture that you found to use with your work..Faith based for sure..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Callus Avatar
October 29, 2015 at 8:33 AM
Very creative; uniquely tackled, Edward. I would have liked to see this place higher. #7 Congrats on a merited win. // paul
Tor Avatar
October 28, 2015 at 7:08 AM
Edward nice win my friend. Very clever.
Cheema Avatar
October 28, 2015 at 7:04 AM
Couldn't have thought on these lines-autumn leaves are tears! Congrats Edward!
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October 28, 2015 at 1:20 AM
Edward, Congratulations on your awesome Autumn win. **SKAT**
Manassian Avatar
October 23, 2015 at 10:55 AM
Lovely haiku, Edward. I liked the second line so much. Good luck in the contest. Hugs
Tor Avatar
October 23, 2015 at 7:58 AM
Clever imagery Edward. Much meant with few words. Excellent write and entry for the contest.
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