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Harvest Ball Fresh Autumn leaves were dancing in the breeze twirling, swirling down from black rain-soaked trees. The oak leaf dressed in scarlet for the fall while others chose bright amber for the ball. Vermillion was the color to be worn as sugar maples laughed and danced till dawn. The whistle of the wind was their sweet song darkened bark tuxedos swaying along. A pewter sky reveals the light of day and on damp ground the lovely dancers lay. 10/15/18

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Date: 10/22/2018 5:05:00 PM
I love the flamboyant dance imagery, Janis. These are beautiful descriptions of autumn. Wendy
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Date: 10/22/2018 4:12:00 PM
Lovely, Janis. Well penned.
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Date: 10/16/2018 7:08:00 PM
This is a fantastic autumnal poem, Janis!! MY COMPLIMENTS!
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