Hartshorns' Silver Moon Grass

They write in the language of perfume
flowery powdered words all layered
colours rising and lowering 
in different light spectrums
as if the reader could discern 
without wisened translator 
their seductive dimensions
conveyed within 
their small larger other worlds
notes upon notes, heady notes,
their subtle infractions
like music tinkling through 
the brain bleeds, poets 
and their otherworldly refrains,
naphthalene aired for old time’s sake 
shaken out like clean crisp white sheets 
billowing in the translucent lingerie breeze, 
bedrocks shaken 
the little flocks
small black murders flying 
provocatively erratic stirred up 
off the cobalt page
into an evocative 
higher wider 
elusive  space 
taken shockingly aback
where the heady blast 
of Spirit of Hartshorn
shakes buried lover’s awake
to walk barefoot and naked 
blindly in love 
touching each other
through the long wet days 
sugar-coated addictions
tall poppies crimson pimpernels
wading nubile through blades 
of silver moon grass
licking their ankles and heels
raising their prim outskirts, 
forbidden territories 
within the rising mist, 
the ever present,
like a breeze, 
kisses their ripe
cherry orchards
unending hunger 
satiated, all is manna
as they meander 
through daze of 
dusky dawn valleys
those garden of eden thighs,
the transparent,
slithering like hands 
caressing treasure trunks
ivy leaves for plucking 
further up above 
the high waists 
to touch what 
wastes away, unheard,
what beats there, 
where the crown sits
like some holy being 
under its ribbed cage 
red ripe like a seeded apple,
that place, just there, beating
singing some kind of hymn,
like a regulated anthem, 
they're way up into their feels  
like some devilish chase 
like heaven's come
calling them away 

They write in the language of perfume
flowery powdered words all layered
colours rising and lowering 
in different light spectrums
as if the reader could discern 
without wisened translator 
their seductive dimensions

some things are better 
left unsaid 
like this Magdalene, 

K.I.S.S.





Candide Diderot. ‘24 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 3/19/2024 4:46:00 PM
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Date: 3/19/2024 4:47:00 PM
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Date: 3/19/2024 8:34:00 AM
Dear Candide, What a wonderful, mesmerizing journey through lush imagery and sensory language! The way you place words together creates rich emotions and landscapes, drawing the reader into a world of seduction and intrigue. I love your mastery of language which is evident in the layers of meaning and depth within each line. I was a great exploration into the hidden realms of desire and passion through your poetic lens. - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 3/19/2024 9:26:00 AM
Thank you. At this point, blessings may not be enough to save me. :)
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