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There are a few things that ought not to ever qualm. A few feelings ought to never be felt anytime ahead. A few cries are once unheard because they are calm. Hearts are what clutches them to the beat of the balm. Character traits should never be bought or sold. There are a few things that ought not to ever qualm. Some works of art should be colored in the palm. A few capabilities should not ever be extolled. A few cries are once unheard because they are calm. You will never be praised for making a bogus claim. Some squiggly lines will nevermore be produced. There are a few things that ought not to ever qualm. The ego of this planet is, anyhow, the inner alarm. So do not stay silent; instead, shout clearly and loud A few cries are once unheard because they are calm. Nothing in this world can dim your realm. Hence, fly your plane and devour the view foretold. A few cries are once unheard because they are calm. There are a few things that ought not to ever qualm.
Written: November 20, 2021

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Date: 11/21/2021 3:27:00 AM
Excellently done despite the difficulties this poetic form presents, my friend, Lasaad! Blessings!
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Date: 11/20/2021 10:12:00 PM
I wrote only two villanelles inall, one got a POTD. I always found it difficult to write. You did a great job. ~~
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Date: 11/20/2021 8:55:00 PM
Not an easy form to follow, Lasaad, but weaves on through the stanzas. Great poetry.
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