Harmony of Heartbeats

I want him to hold me like he holds his guitar
Fingers of his left hand light but sure on my neck
His right hand tracing melodies on my body

I want him to hold my body against his
And make my heartbeat increase in speed
Until it matches the rhythm of the riff
His fingers play across strings or skin
As his tongue teaches mine the shapes
Of the song he's singing so that
Where our lips meet there is harmony
Because his heart beats just as fast

I wish I could hold him like I hold my guitar
Fingers of my left hand light but sure on his neck
My right hand tracing melodies on his body
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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February 26, 2014 at 9:24 PM
Cameron, thank you for setting the music and the mood with your winning. Poem. Congratulations:) Take Care ~SKAT~
Hamilton Avatar
February 25, 2014 at 2:54 AM
hi Cameron great pen congrats on win hugs
Hartley Avatar
February 25, 2014 at 10:48 AM
thanks lol hugs
Mehta Avatar
February 24, 2014 at 3:50 AM
Enjoyed your write on mood music and congrats on the win,cameron
Hartley Avatar
February 25, 2014 at 10:47 AM
thanks :)
Harper Avatar
February 24, 2014 at 12:20 AM
Congratulations on your win Cameron--this was a really tough batch to judge, all so well written. I appreciated yours for your mood, desire and the sense of music. Thanks for entering my contest.
Hartley Avatar
February 25, 2014 at 10:47 AM
thanks for having me in your contest :)
Clemons Avatar
January 30, 2014 at 3:33 PM
Wow, great poem. Cameron. Deeply expressive feelings, metaphorically related to the guitar. Brilliant choice of words. Enjoyable overall. Check out some of my poems, might find some you like. Peace.
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January 28, 2014 at 7:20 PM
Together, you would make beautiful music together. I enjoyed the read.
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