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music instigator of love and vehemence can start an inferno within accord

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John Rhinem

Date: 1/2/2012 1:29:00 PM

....Smile ˜ Today I seem to be in the mood to share a few musicl lyrics here and there * My Dear Precious Beautiful Wilma * These would be from a song by The. Goo Goo Dolls titled, "Name" ˜ I love the seemingful contrastings usage of terms within this I would perhaps say, insightful & truthful verse my dear ˜ From embers rises fire and from fire dances flames * Very brilliant & very beautiful ˜ Happy New Year Unto Your Beauty * My Love to You Always; John!:) ˜

John Rhinem

Date: 1/2/2012 1:21:00 PM

Smile ˜ And even though the moment passed me by, I still can't turn away • I saw the dreams you never thought you'd lose, tossed along the way • And letters that you never meant to send, lost or thrown away • And now we've grown up orphans that knew their names, don't belong to no one that's a shame, you could hide behind me maybe for awhile and, I won't tell no one your name * Scars are souviners you never lose, the past is never, did your lose yourself somewhere, did you get to be a star • Don't it make you sad to know that life is more than who we are * We grew up way too fast and now there's nothing to believe as, reruns become our history • A tired son keeps playing on a tired radio and I won't tell them your name * Cont)

David Williams

Date: 9/10/2011 3:07:00 AM

hey Wilma, got your email, many thanks will have a go later today.. David

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 9/9/2011 7:39:00 PM

Love how you gradually build this into the inferno. A well though out rhyme.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/9/2011 5:40:00 PM

thanks, wilms... no worries:) huggs

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 9/9/2011 5:06:00 PM

This sure builds in emotion! Great one Wilma

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/9/2011 3:33:00 PM

SOUP MAIL, important!

David Williams

Date: 9/9/2011 4:54:00 AM

hey Wilma i like this but am very confused as to the form???? thanks for your comments are you recieving my soup mails if so i will send you my email add. David

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/9/2011 3:41:00 AM

thanks for joining, wilma...wow!..kindly check my new blog on cinquain reminder...good luck with huggs! :) nette