Harm

Heart of glass Once transparent and clear Shattered Love drained , disappeared Porcelain spirit Crumbled , crushed No longer soars Trust turned to dust Crystal soul Cracked and chipped Time needs to restore Damage from harms cruel grip

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Heidi Sands

Date: 3/21/2025 3:58:00 PM

Wow, very descriptive to hurtful times. Well written Deb :)

Deb M
Date: 3/23/2025 4:28:00 AM

Thanks Heidi…..hope are doing well? Debx

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/21/2025 3:36:00 PM

Prescient imagery shielding the pain, Deb.

Deb M
Date: 3/23/2025 4:28:00 AM

Cheers BB….Debx

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 3/21/2025 11:50:00 AM

An emotional poem, Deb. I had to wipe away a tear.

Deb M
Date: 3/21/2025 1:26:00 PM

Aww you are a sweet man with a big ole soft heart brother Jerry! Debx

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 3/20/2025 7:18:00 PM

You describe this so well. Once the trust is broken cracks begin to show and the heart becomes fragile. It needs time to mend to find it's way in the difficult times. It takes a long time. love phyl

Deb M
Date: 3/21/2025 2:42:00 PM

Thankyou so much Phyl….Debx

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/20/2025 4:43:00 PM

Just breathe...In, Out, In, Out. Relax and know who sends hugs! (Hint: I do) LO :) PS: the characters I act o type are 'CPR' LOL

Deb M
Date: 3/21/2025 2:38:00 PM

Its not happening to me LO so no need for CPR hehe! Thankyou my friend! Debx

John Read

Date: 3/20/2025 11:13:00 AM

Hi Deb, a very emotional poem, must admit there's been times I've felt this way. xx

Deb M
Date: 3/21/2025 2:41:00 PM

I think we all have felt fragile in our lifetime. Thanks so much John….Debx

Ink Empress

Date: 3/20/2025 8:52:00 AM

Very well written dear debx, once trust is stained and heart is broken, when fragile it is, already, its hard to restore or mend, so we must always remember to be mindful and kind always! A very touching poem this is! So good to read you! Been a while! Hope you are doing well. Sending you light always

Deb M
Date: 3/21/2025 2:39:00 PM

Always lovely to see you sweet Ink….thankyou for your kind words! Debx

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/20/2025 5:38:00 AM

Dear Deb, I just had to say how much your piece hit home for me. It’s like you captured all those feelings we sometimes struggle to express. Seriously, your talent is notable! Everyone deserves a voice and you spoke for so many. Spring Blessings, my Dear Friend, Daniel

Deb M
Date: 3/20/2025 6:21:00 AM

Wow thankyou so much Daniel! You are way too kind my friend! Debx Soupmail