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Hard To Breathe

memories of love shadowed by grief and sadness- moving on alone 7/12/2019 howmanysyllables.com Poetry Contest: Senryu About Greed, Lust Or Loss. Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin

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Date: 7/18/2019 8:20:00 PM
Hard to move on alone when you're shadowed... Poetry hugs, Eve. Best wishes, Gershon
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Date: 7/17/2019 12:23:00 PM
Very touching, Eve. Loss never comes easy. Take care. ~ Congratulation son your deserved win. Hugs // paul
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Date: 7/16/2019 10:44:00 PM
Nice turn after the second line, Eve ... Congratulations ...
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Date: 7/16/2019 6:11:00 PM
this is very nicely done. Congrats for the win, Eve.
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Date: 7/16/2019 2:11:00 AM
Loved this. Feel a sad tug when I read.
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Date: 7/16/2019 12:18:00 AM
such a sad loss...well written. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 7/15/2019 7:41:00 PM
FAB Poem!
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Date: 7/15/2019 7:25:00 PM
Congratulations, Eve! The final line!
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Date: 7/15/2019 6:53:00 PM
Eve, congratulations on your winning placement with your heartfelt senryu!
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Date: 7/13/2019 3:26:00 PM
This is so beautiful Eve sending you love, hugs and kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 7/13/2019 5:09:00 AM
Outstanding dearest, Eve! xxx
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Date: 7/12/2019 11:25:00 PM
deeply moving 'ku, eve... sending my hugggs
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