Hard Fell the Snow

Hard fell the snow, slanting down ~ no frozen arrowheads lay on the ground

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Arturo Michael

Date: 2/12/2020 8:28:00 AM

Nothing but white blankets of wet...it's COLD

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/10/2020 12:13:00 PM

A monoku that epitomizes Chicago's winters.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/10/2020 12:58:00 PM

You clearly know the 'beast!' Thanks, Caren. :) Gershon

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/10/2020 9:04:00 AM

To have snow falling most of Winter and people who have to survive this bitterly cold season and freezing days, for me are heroes. We on the other hand have unbearably hot weather in Summer, you have to have a pool, or sizzle to a frazzle or perhaps faint and fry - oh that we had only ever had Spring and Autumn, the best seasons ever. Blessings, Jennifer.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/10/2020 11:20:00 AM

Ah, you'd either be bored or you'd stop appreciating the fine weather if you only had Spring or Fall, but go ahead and try it anyway! Smiles, Gershon

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/10/2020 8:03:00 AM

We have had our share of snow arrows this year. Well done Gershon.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/10/2020 11:18:00 AM

Winter's growing strong here in Chicago. Hey, it's February. Thanks, Richard. ~ Gershon

Jenish Somadas

Date: 2/9/2020 9:25:00 PM

Snow is still falling? Great.. Nice monoku..

Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/10/2020 11:17:00 AM

February in Chicago -- the snow is still falling, of course. We just hope it's not still falling April around here. Ta, ta! ~ Gershon