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Lustful love like monsoon rain, thunders down and is soon gone, true love like an endless chain, every new day is reborn. you find that glow in her eyes, in her tender nurtured smile, that love she springs to surprise, to bring back youth from exile! creases of age on the face, some silver streaks mark her hair, these only enhance her grace, mellowed times, memories share! so in your arms hold her close, this happy Valentine’s day, give her the gift of red rose, for lasting love let us pray!
3rd place win Written 14/02/2021 Valentine contest Richard Lamoureux 7 syllables each line abab cdcd efef rhyme sequence

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Date: 3/2/2021 11:08:00 AM
Tender, eloquent words Krish. They reach into the heart and give it a hug with a reminder to remember all the love we experience. Blessings to you. Thank you sharing your heart. Congratulations on your win!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 3/2/2021 12:42:00 PM
Thanks Sam! your words cheer me up!
Date: 3/1/2021 10:48:00 PM
Hi Krish, I’m just coming back to say congratulations on your win. Have a wonderful evening:-) Alexis
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 3/2/2021 1:59:00 AM
Thanks Alexis! Thanks for your love and good wishes!:)
Date: 3/1/2021 7:46:00 AM
Thanks for adding to the Valentine mood. Congrats on your win in my contest.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 3/1/2021 8:01:00 AM
Thank you Richard! Thanks for the timely, romantic contest!
Date: 2/15/2021 12:40:00 AM
Every line a gem, especially first para. True love grows with age. Lust is physical. Enjoy your isolation with your valentine. Accumulate many more wonderful memories till life lasts. God bless! Take care Rama
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 2/15/2021 3:14:00 AM
This comment makes my day! Thanks. God bless!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 2/15/2021 1:50:00 AM
Thanks Rama! so grateful to have you as a friend and sister!
Date: 2/14/2021 1:33:00 PM
Lovely dedication Krish, hope you too have had a lovely day Tom
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 2/14/2021 1:42:00 PM
Thanks Tom! Yes, indeed! lovely little celebration this!
Date: 2/14/2021 12:20:00 PM
Hi Krish, What a beautiful and heartfelt write. Well done. Happy Valentine's Day to you too:-) Alexis
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 2/14/2021 12:22:00 PM
Thanks Alexis! Hope you were blessed with a Happy V day!

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