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Happy To Be Here

Happy to be here Is there someone you know who's dark days only grow And they can't say, they're happy to be here When a bright, new day breaks but, they're afraid to awake And they won't say they're happy to be here And they can't say they're happy to be here There's a rainbow, it's true it's color's, fading hues And they can't find any joy in living And a bird when it sings doesn't mean anything There's no meaning in their song of beauty ooh and I feel bad for them...... ooh and I feel bad for them...... And their friends, family just want them to be free but their thoughts, keep them enchained, in prison When their hands and their feet have been bound endlessly and their only companion is sorrow And a new day is born but they feel so forlorn and the voices just bellow with laughter And they can't say their happy to be here oooh and I feel bad for them oooh and I feel bad for them Every day is a task so they put on new masks so that no one can see, they've been crying Like the tears of a clown when no one is around How can anyone know what they're feeling? oooh and I feel bad for them oooh and I feel bad for them And they say there's a pill but they haven't the will they say no pill, can fill, all their empty So they live day to day and they hope and they pray Please forgive me God, for what I'm thinking oooh and I feel bad for them oooh and I feel bad for them So you go the next day want to wipe their tears away but, you get there, far too late, to save them oooh and I feel bad for them oooh and I feel bad for them They just couldn't say, they're happy to be here! John Derek Hamilton September 06,2016

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Date: 9/7/2016 10:10:00 AM
A sad but beautiful song, which many can relate to...:)
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John Hamilton
Date: 9/7/2016 11:25:00 AM
Thanks Jo it's true, so many are affected by depression. Thanks for the visit and your comments are always appreciated.
Date: 9/7/2016 8:38:00 AM
Dear John, "Every day is a task so they put on new masks so that no one can see, they've been crying" perfectly said for the theme of this lyric. You make me want to try to write a lyric so bad! I don't think I can do it- well done once again! :)-luloo
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John Hamilton
Date: 9/7/2016 11:23:00 AM
Thanks Laura I'm sure you can do it, just pick a song you like, write out the existing lyrics, breaking them down to their syllable counts per line, then think of a theme that captures the feel of the song, then superimpose new lyrics to the structure of the old ones, see how easy! Give it a try it's great fun! Thanks for the visit.
Date: 9/6/2016 10:42:00 PM
John, this could be a RECORD. it really could! I love this lyrical approach to a topic that is close to many of us. I think many people know at least one very depressed person in their circle of friends or family. it's tragic. and yes, we can only feel sad sometimes.
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John Hamilton
Date: 9/7/2016 8:18:00 AM
It was a famous record, but with different words, my lyrics are totally different so the song is unrecognizable now, now to figure out how to come up with a melody to match the new lyrics. You would be shocked which song this was taken from soup mail if you want to know. Hint biggest hard rock ballad of all time.
Date: 9/6/2016 4:22:00 PM
Sounds like somebody's been reading my diary.Lol Great write John. You seem to know quite a bit about depression. If so, I am sorry for you.
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John Hamilton
Date: 9/6/2016 5:05:00 PM
Thanks Daniel, yeah,it's hard for many people just to make it through each day. I have a knack for empathetic writing, so not really an issue for me, but thanks for your concern. Cheers

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