Happy Heaven Hermit

A few years ago I was installing carpet in someone's house and a little girl approached me and started asking me questions. A few minutes went by and she had told me that she had a hermit crab that had just died the night before. She had Hermit for 3-1/2 years and she was truly saddened by his death. So on my lunch break I wrote her this poem to cheer her up. Half way through she and her mother started bawling. Thank goodness by the time I was finished they both had smiles. I received two big hugs that day and one great feeling! 

I met a girl named Emily 
She was prettier than gold
 
She had a little hermit crab 
That was almost four years old
 
He came out of his shell one day 
And he said, "It's time to go

I'm going up to heaven now 
And I thought that you should know
 
I wanted to tell you, Emily 
Because I know how much you care
 
So, when you go to bed tonight 
Please say a little prayer"
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George Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 4:59 AM
Emily must have been immensely pleased with your poem. You can be happy that you being poet, could bring instant joy to a saddened little girl. Congratulations Charlie on your POTD
Meadows Avatar
June 18, 2023 at 10:33 PM
It was kind of you to write a poem for them. I'm sure they will appreciate it. Congratulations on your POTD. Well done.
Messina Avatar
June 19, 2023 at 2:50 PM
Thank you so much, Jeanette.
Buhagiar Avatar
June 18, 2023 at 10:12 PM
Congratulations on your POTD
Messina Avatar
June 19, 2023 at 2:51 PM
Thank you, Victor.
Anaya Avatar
June 18, 2023 at 7:16 PM
Congratulations on your POTD Charlie! What do hermit crabs do on Father's Day? Shellabrate their dads.
Messina Avatar
June 19, 2023 at 2:52 PM
Thank you, Anaya. LOL- Love it!
Nicole Avatar
June 18, 2023 at 5:40 PM
Charles, words can certainly heal a broken heart. Such a sweet thing to do, for Emily. This is beautiful and tender, all at the same time. Congratulations my dear friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
Messina Avatar
June 19, 2023 at 2:53 PM
Isn't that the truth :) Thank you for your kind words and comments, Brandy. Hugs Charlie
Gorelick Avatar
June 18, 2023 at 5:09 PM
Congratulations on a POTD! A thoughtful and caring poem, that will not just brighten up the day of a young girl but will provide her with a positive outlook. I hope Hermit the crab is in a none smoking section of heaven and stays away from seafood lovers! Robert
Messina Avatar
June 19, 2023 at 2:56 PM
Thanks Robert, they say smoked hermit is tasty (lol) Much appreciate your comments! Charlie
Hawkins Avatar
June 18, 2023 at 4:55 PM
Congratulations on POTD. your poem is lovely full of kindness, compassion and understanding. I could picture you and Emily conversing about the sad loss of her hermit crab. Your sweet poem gave me a feeling of warmth and peace, Thank you, Charlie. Take care, Shirley
Messina Avatar
June 19, 2023 at 2:58 PM
Shirley, thank you for your lovely comments...much appreciated! Stay warm and peaceful my dear friend. Hugs Charlie
Poet Avatar
June 18, 2023 at 2:40 PM
Charlie, your piece is exquisitely crafted. The finest gifts are those that embrace your benevolence. Your compassion resonates deeply within me. I extend my best wishes for Father's Day and congratulations on the honor of the POTD.
Messina Avatar
June 19, 2023 at 3:01 PM
Lasaad, you speak the words of a wise man, my friend "The finest gifts" I hope you had a wonderful Father's Day as well. Thanks for your kind words! All the best...Charlie
Lawrence Avatar
June 18, 2023 at 12:51 PM
The best gifts - hugs for your kindness ! So sweet . So touching . I love your heart Charlie ! Happy Fathers Day and congratulations on POTD ! Hugs, Susan :)
Messina Avatar
June 19, 2023 at 3:07 PM
Susan, every time I read this poem, I can feel those hugs again :) Thank you for your beautiful comments. Hugs Charlie x
Tor Avatar
June 18, 2023 at 11:49 AM
Charlie back again to congratulate you. I am so glad you got special honors for this one Charlie you deserve it for such a kind act you did. Congratulations my frined really love this one...
Messina Avatar
June 19, 2023 at 3:19 PM
Michael, thank you for reading some of my poetry and catching up. I will catch up with you as well. Thanks also, for your kind thoughts and comments, my friend.
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June 18, 2023 at 11:25 AM
That’s so lovely Charles, I’m sure little Emily will cherish this poem you wrote for her forever. Congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Belle
Messina Avatar
June 19, 2023 at 3:20 PM
Belle, I believe she will :) Thank you for your kind words. Hugs Charlie
Turner Avatar
June 18, 2023 at 11:07 AM
Congratulations on POTD Charlie and Happy Father's Day:) Oh, by the way. I havent had a cigarette in over 3 months:)
Messina Avatar
June 19, 2023 at 3:23 PM
Thank you, Daniel. Keep up the GREAT work...it's a terrible habit, one I wish I never started. Not only are you doing yourself well, but at close to $11.00/pack you are saving a lot of cash-ola as well. Hope you had a nice Father's Day :)
May Avatar
June 18, 2023 at 10:26 AM
Wonderful story Charles, Congrats on POTD
Messina Avatar
June 19, 2023 at 3:24 PM
Thank you so much, Joseph!
Slaughter Avatar
June 18, 2023 at 10:19 AM
Now, that's what any good carpet layer should do. A very sweet tale, Charles, and congrats on POYD.
Messina Avatar
June 19, 2023 at 3:26 PM
Who says I'm good... after 45 years of installing I better be...or I should find another occupation (lol) Thanks for your kind words, Jim.
Baker Avatar
June 18, 2023 at 10:07 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Charles, and for share some love with the little girl to comfort her in her time of feeling loss. It's nice to be able to help someone with our poetry isn't it? Enjoy your special day of recognition my friend, Bill
Messina Avatar
June 19, 2023 at 3:28 PM
Bill, the pleasure we get from writing for someone is like no other. Thanks for your kind words, dear friend. Charlie
Romios Avatar
June 18, 2023 at 9:49 AM
Congratulations, my friend. .what a great story in poem Honours on this POTD Pangie xx
Messina Avatar
June 19, 2023 at 3:29 PM
Thank you so much, Pangie. Hugs Charlie xx
Goldsmith Avatar
June 18, 2023 at 9:04 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A wonderful write/story. Thanks for adding the note about your write. Have a blessed day/week............
Messina Avatar
June 19, 2023 at 3:32 PM
Paula, every time I read this poem I think about that little beautiful girl. Thank you for your kind words. Blessings dear friend. Hugs
Fowler Avatar
June 18, 2023 at 8:09 AM
Sweet, sweet, sweet Charlie. You are a good man! Congratulations on POTD. Linda :)
Messina Avatar
June 19, 2023 at 3:33 PM
Aww...thank you, Alice. I try my best :) Hugs Charlie
Summers Avatar
June 18, 2023 at 8:06 AM
Great story, great poem. A most deserved POTD. John
Messina Avatar
June 19, 2023 at 3:34 PM
Thank you, John. Much appreciated my friend.. Charlie
Seeker Avatar
June 18, 2023 at 7:57 AM
How beautiful this is, the thought and the poem, both! Warmest congratulations on POTD, Charles
Messina Avatar
June 19, 2023 at 3:36 PM
Thank you so much, U.S. for your kind words and comments :)
Wolf Avatar
June 18, 2023 at 7:44 AM
Sweetest frog poem ever written, Charlie! Congrats on POTD! Happy Sunday, Gershon
Messina Avatar
June 19, 2023 at 3:37 PM
Ribbit, Ribbit (lol) Thank you, Gershon. Happy Monday :) Charlie
Elless Avatar
June 18, 2023 at 7:12 AM
Congrats on Your POTD. A little kindness goes a long way. Stay Creative.
Messina Avatar
June 19, 2023 at 3:39 PM
Yes R.J. it sure does :) You as well...thank you for your comments. Charlie
Sands Avatar
June 18, 2023 at 6:31 AM
Very sweet and kind. Congratulations for POTD :)
Messina Avatar
June 19, 2023 at 3:40 PM
Thank you so much, Heidi :)
Daniel Avatar
June 18, 2023 at 6:17 AM
Such a sweet poem for Emily from a kind soul, Charlie, congratulations on POTD:)
Messina Avatar
June 19, 2023 at 3:41 PM
Aww. thank you for your sweet words, Joanna. Hugs Charlie
Buhagiar Avatar
June 18, 2023 at 6:11 AM
Congrats on your POTD/
Messina Avatar
June 19, 2023 at 3:41 PM
Thank you, Victor! Much appreciated :)
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