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Happy Feet

her foam tickles my toes frosting on the cake of walking in gritty sand my feet sigh; finally on vacation

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Date: 11/5/2021 5:35:00 PM
Happy feet, says it all!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/6/2021 3:55:00 PM
I liked this one rather well myself
Date: 11/5/2021 9:02:00 AM
What a fun write. Wow!!! Only 3 lines for a full story. I love and miss the beach/sand. Have a blessed day.................
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/5/2021 10:14:00 AM
I don't love it but it loves me
Date: 11/4/2021 8:14:00 PM
Ah, there's no feeling like sand on my feet. I'm going to know that feeling in less than two weeks in Puerto Vallarta, Mexico. Sure hope my flights aren't cancelled!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/5/2021 10:14:00 AM
Me too!

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