Happy Birthday Silent One

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HAPPY BIRTHDAY SILENT ONE! A tribute written using your quotes,to you,my partner in poetry, for guiding me poetically and beyond for so many years, thank you for everything you are!

Birds
care not
for whom they
sing, as beneath
skies of flickering
flowers and diamond dews~
we follow merlot wine rays..
For between steel dusk and bronze dawn,
where shadows of silent sonnets flow
we are all petals of imperfection
sharing the same sun glazed in honeyed hope~
that floats from purple hued pansies to~
ebony buds, wrapped in lilac 
love and wisteria warmth, 
like a blue bouquet of,
blissful butterflies
fluttering inked~
poetry
to the 
stars
and 
soul of
the rose moon,
mirroring his
selfless silhouette 
forever calming the
freckled ripples of grieving 
seas, tonight my heart knits rhymeless
pleas in saffron syllables, wishing
his gemini garden will glow and thrive… 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 6/22/2024 6:07:00 PM
"tonight my heart knits rhymeless pleas in saffron syllables, wishing his gemini garden will glow and thrive." You've done Great Dear Ink. He deserves all the love and applause. I'm particularly grateful to him too. Happy birthday Silent. I wish you happiness and more creative sparks.
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Date: 6/17/2024 2:53:00 PM
Happy birthday, Silent One! What a lovely and sweet poem- :) <3
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Date: 6/17/2024 11:05:00 AM
An exquisitely written Birthday Tribute to an extraordinary SO!! Happy Birthday, Silent One! That is really sweet of you, Ink! You are a very remarkable person.
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Date: 6/17/2024 9:21:00 AM
Ahh!! So thoughtful of you to write this one for SO. Very descriptive. It is good that he/she has had one more birthday. Sara K
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Date: 6/17/2024 8:54:00 AM
Aha. You used more than one quote . I kind of wanted to do that with mine. Such a lovely double etheree. What day exactly was his Bday?
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Date: 6/16/2024 11:15:00 PM
Dear Empress, this is indeed a lovely tribute to Silent One. You two bewitch and gladden poetry lovers with your unparalleled poetic prowess. It is natural for you to have a mutual admiration. I am happy that I too am a weed in the Gemini Garden born on 16th June. Wish Silent One a Happy Birthday and Empress a special thanks for honoring a talented poet using his own words.
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Date: 6/17/2024 6:39:00 AM
Oh my gosh sweet valsa! Happy birthday!!!! Gemini star you are too! No wonder you are so good with words! Hugs
Date: 6/15/2024 9:51:00 PM
Dearest Inky, a beautiful poem for a truly beautiful Soul. Silent One's presence and encouragement on Poetry Soup were not just appreciated, but they left an indelible mark on many of us new poets when we first joined. He was kind and I'm sure he cringed at some of my early attempts but he always told me I could do better. Happy Birthday Silent One. You're always appreciated...Hugs
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Date: 6/15/2024 11:59:00 PM
He still cringes at my metaphors sometimes, have to try extra for his contests haha. Thank you sweet beautiful maria. I appreciate your visit,
Date: 6/15/2024 3:27:00 PM
"we are all petals of imperfection sharing the same sun glazed in honeyed hope~" Beautiful, profound imagery. "tonight my heart knits rhymeless pleas in saffron syllables, wishing his gemini garden will glow and thrive…" Absolutely perfect! Happy birthday, Si.
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Date: 6/15/2024 11:59:00 PM
Thank you for your visit and wish joe appreciate your presence
Date: 6/15/2024 2:51:00 PM
A beautiful poem for a beautiful soul, lovely Ink. Happy Birthday Silent One… Beryl
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Date: 6/16/2024 12:02:00 AM
Thank you dear beryl for joining in
Date: 6/15/2024 11:03:00 AM
Yours is a positive energy like no others Empress, your poetry has awakened something inside of me and I've learned so much from you and Silent One. I strive to use colorful imagery. I've grown numb perhaps even callous from love's unrelenting fickle passionate dance. Metaphors are difficult. I hope one day to open up these unexplored arenas within me. Happy Birthday Silent One, enjoy the most beautiful tribute from our Ink! xo
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Date: 6/16/2024 12:17:00 AM
Awwn what a sweet thing to say, really, you are so kind, one of those few that have something nice to say on soup. Grateful for your kindness.
Date: 6/15/2024 9:32:00 AM
A beautifully penned Birthday Ode to a very special SO!! Happy Birthday Silent One!!! So thoughtful and kind of you Ink!! You are truly an inspiring individual.
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Date: 6/16/2024 12:17:00 AM
Thats very kind of you thnk you so much
Date: 6/15/2024 5:29:00 AM
My sweet Ink.. I don't think anyone has ever made this fuss about me on my birthday... You always know how to make it that extra bit special, even though you know i dont really celebrate... I will overcome the embarrassment of all the attention and take all the blessings and love you offer me with upmost gratitude.. Thank you for being a special and wonderful friend in the last few years, not sure what I would do without you.. sometimes... Thanks my little Kundalini...
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Date: 6/15/2024 5:58:00 AM
Awwn haha well well you deserve more for being a sincere and loyal friend my friend! Please do read the poem too later hahah sorry its just an etheree not upto your poetic standards! But it comes from my heart.
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Ink Empress
Date: 6/15/2024 5:58:00 AM
Tom woody when is your birthday?
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Tom Woody
Date: 6/15/2024 5:37:00 AM
You don't celebrate birthdays? Me too
Date: 6/15/2024 1:37:00 AM
Happy birthday silent one … beautiful poem
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