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Moonbeams shine, sprouting sepia stars Her heart's deepest recesses Glow in the waves of a rose lake Views that enliven the pulse of the nerves Fairy tones bestow fragrance Clouds of jasmine chilled and orchids nipped Silky brown lips spoke in infinite bliss A lunar tale of astral longevity Shining souls mingled with golden moonlight Scary, but delightfully hypnotic Sour love haunts my hoarse heart. Her love drowns out the lonesome cries Her devotion is soothing She keeps her vows and burrows Listen to the rustle of the night What matters most is manifested in pure love. My love stems from a strange sublimity It springs from suffering for the transient Only solemn pain can reveal what I hold dear The inevitable creation faces the slightest hope But in vain, its misty wings flap. Twilight makes the sky and the moon sparkle Her love and guidance are always there And when everyone else gives up, I dwell entirely on her cheerful skill Wild strokes scattered tiny dots in fine hues Glorious dreams dispelled akin to ashes Under the sullen moon, the yen is brewing The crimson color of sadness faded The healing rainbow halo dissipated. In my thoughts, you always stay Texts throw me off lopsided So do Twilight's eyes between lingering red breaths And where do we stray to escape? A galaxy of tender kisses Same as perfume, I hold it in my hands when blindness overwhelms emotion. Her love soothes my heart frozen, stiff, and exhausted A sharp wound pierces my chest She reminds me of my ego It has always let me stray Secretly, it can be understood To the sobbing, to the beast, to eternity to the melancholy dance melody I wish to experience the rapture To live among my loved ones. This squelchy, neoteric heart is etched with the shadow of a smirking eclipse I long for the bright blue-striped moon sharing stardust love with the universe Misty clouds gleam sharply Evoke halcyon, carefree reflections Reminiscences of a legacy are left behind Flowers worthy of praise are true They sustain my mental clarity I nourish my health for the stability of my soul. Even at difficult times, God's love is enough All I can say is to kneel and worship God Because He brought us together so tenderly I believe God has blessed us. With gratitude from our Creator Happy birthday, sweet angel! You can conquer every challenge We have eternal love from God! I appreciate your kindness and love Even in the face of adversity You have been patient and gentle I will always respect your generosity.
Written: March 07, 2023 For You, Love Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Regina McIntosh

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 3/13/2023 2:37:00 AM
Wonderful poem , Congratulations on your top win :)
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Date: 3/12/2023 11:16:00 PM
wow superb the dearly poem; great to read the loving poetic expression; congrats
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Date: 3/12/2023 4:14:00 AM
So beautiful - Congrats and God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Date: 3/9/2023 4:38:00 AM
Beautiful, Lasaad! You open your heart and turn it into a lovely and romantic jewel!
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Date: 3/8/2023 8:28:00 PM
"Her love and guidance are always there And when everyone else gives up, I dwell entirely on her cheerful skill" .... Husband and wife are the true companions in life filling each others needs. When children grow up, they will leave us and the parents will be left aone, their sense of loneliness heightening their need for each other. This lovely tribute written in impeccable language is another badge of your poetic prowess. All the Best dear friend.
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Date: 3/8/2023 6:15:00 PM
Wow, powerful emotions this lovely poem gives as a gift to this reader, yes a powerful poem of love and thanks, doesn't get much better than this. Harry
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Date: 3/8/2023 11:41:00 AM
An exquisitely beautiful birthday poem, Lasaad! It was such a pleasure to read. :)
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Date: 3/8/2023 10:31:00 AM
What a work. What can I say...you have a real gift!!
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Date: 3/8/2023 9:43:00 AM
A heavenly hymn to a birthday that deserves recognition, my dearest friend, Lasaad!
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Date: 3/8/2023 6:33:00 AM
A wonderful birthday poem, the first stanzas so fab poetic and the ending stanza lovely with gratitude to God. Kudos for this epic. <<<<<<<<<<<<<<>>>>*>>>>>>>>>>*********** Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
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Date: 3/8/2023 6:25:00 AM
- I felt this deep in my soul ... so beautiful, Las - Best wishes in the contest - hugs
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Date: 3/8/2023 5:24:00 AM
Love emanates from the heart to honor the beloved. A beautiful tribute you wrote my friend--she would treasure it. So kind!
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Date: 3/8/2023 1:51:00 AM
Returning your Happy Birthday.
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