Happy

Happy describes how All strive to feel each new day; Patience must avow- Picking times for work and play Yet, to balance them somehow. May 17, 2021 Contest: TANKACROSTIC Poetry Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich Syllables: 5/7/5/7/7 Rhyme Scheme: a/b/a/b/a

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Joseph May

Date: 1/16/2024 6:39:00 AM

It is a balance, Nicely penned Sandra, soup mail

Kim Merryman

Date: 6/8/2021 2:28:00 PM

Sandra, congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/6/2021 2:15:00 PM

Hi Sandra, Congratulations on your win. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/6/2021 12:18:00 PM

Lovely thought in this one and nicely rhymed, Sandra. Congrats in my contest

L Milton Hankins

Date: 5/17/2021 11:33:00 AM

Such a nice choice of word and way to describe it, Sandra. Best wishes in Andrea's contest.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/17/2021 10:52:00 AM

It's finding the balance that seems essential to enjoying life, Sandra. Best wishes in Andrea's contest! Hugs, Carolyn