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Happiness

Helium fills the colorful balloons And the party will be this afternoon Party is fun for everyone Plenty of great food and gifts for my son Ice cream with extra chocolate cake Nice to see the family talking out by the lake Everyone is having a good time Some are even reciting a rhyme Singing Happy Birthday out loud will be sublime

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/9/2023 9:19:00 AM

Happiness~Date Written: 2/25/2023~"2 Place"~Note: Acrostic Rhyme

Katharine L. Sparrow

Date: 7/8/2023 7:25:00 PM

A rhyming acrostic! Wonderfully done! It sounds like a wonderful birthday celebration.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/9/2023 9:21:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my Acrostic Rhyme "Happiness" write. I enjoy writing this style of poems. Have a happy/blessed day........................

Constance La France

Date: 3/2/2023 1:14:00 AM

Paula, wonderful Acrostic and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - H Words, well done, blessings, Constance

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/2/2023 6:28:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed my Acrostic "Happiness" write. It is an honor to have this win in your Writing Challenge - H Words. Thanks for having this fun contest. I enjoyed writing this one. Have a happy/blessed day........................

Len Gasun

Date: 3/1/2023 7:50:00 AM

Still loving this stellar happiness acrostic poem of yours my dear friend. Coming back to give my warmest Congratulations on your win! Blessings to you always. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/2/2023 6:24:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Good to see you back again. Glad you love my fun "Happiness" write. Hugs. Have a happy/blessed day........................

Charles Messina

Date: 2/28/2023 6:48:00 PM

Very sweet, Paula. Congratulations on your placement in the contest! ...and "Happy Birthday" to your son! Charlie

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/2/2023 6:22:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed my write. I say, "Happy Birthday" to everyone. Have a happy/blessed day........................

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 2/28/2023 6:34:00 PM

What an amazing acrostic Paula, congrats on your win :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/2/2023 6:20:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed my Acrostic write. It was fun to write. Have a happy/blessed day........................

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 2/28/2023 3:42:00 PM

Lovely Paula Happy Birthday to your son. Congratulations on your win in Constance’s contest… Belle

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/2/2023 6:03:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed my fun write. "Happy Birthday" to everyone. Have a happy/blessed day........................

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/28/2023 10:11:00 AM

- Back with a congratulations, Paula :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/28/2023 2:19:00 PM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Good to see you back again. Hugs. Have a happy/blessed day........................

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/28/2023 9:50:00 AM

Congratulations, Paula, on your podium win; your poem is so lovely, and I like the way you depicted the striking metaphors.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/28/2023 2:18:00 PM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed this fun "Happiness" write. Have a happy/blessed day........................

Ann Peck

Date: 2/28/2023 9:46:00 AM

Such a sweet, happy poem, just full of great images! Congratulations!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/28/2023 2:16:00 PM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Good to see you. Glad you like my fun "Happiness" write. Everyone loves a fun birthday party. Have a happy/blessed day........................

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 2/28/2023 8:02:00 AM

This was a happy write for sure. Enjoyed.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/28/2023 2:12:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed my "Happiness" write. Have a happy/blessed day........................

Stephan McBride

Date: 2/27/2023 5:15:00 PM

This is great my friend, amazing work putting this poem together, like an art piece, love it : )

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/28/2023 2:00:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you love my fun write. It did take extra time/thought. Everyone loves a party~birthday. Have a happy/blessed day........................

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/27/2023 6:41:00 AM

- A lovely birthday party, Paula :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/27/2023 12:46:00 PM

Thanks for your note and for your good luck. Good to see you. Glad you like my fun "Happiness" write. Everyone loves a birthday party. Hugs. Have a happy/blessed day........................

Valsa George

Date: 2/26/2023 10:18:00 PM

A delightful Acrostic ! Great family time. All the Best dear Paula !

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/27/2023 12:46:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed this "Happiness" party Acrostic write. I enjoyed bring it to life. Have a happy/blessed day........................

Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris

Date: 2/26/2023 8:01:00 PM

You did well on this poem. So Wonderful ... Many people like parties.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/27/2023 12:45:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed this fun party write. All ages love a birthday party. Hooray!!! Have a happy/blessed day........................

Panagiota Romios

Date: 2/26/2023 11:06:00 AM

Dazzling with Delight, Paula. A beauty, this is. Panagiota

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/26/2023 12:29:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed my "Happiness" Acrostic Rhyme write. It was fun to do. Hope you are OK. Have a happy/blessed day..............

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/26/2023 10:12:00 AM

Nothing like a happy party. Good one, Paula.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/26/2023 12:25:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you like my happiness write. I enjoyed bring it to life. Have a happy/blessed day........................

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/26/2023 5:15:00 AM

This is special. I enjoyed it Paula :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/26/2023 12:24:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed this fun "Happiness" write. Have a happy/blessed day........................

Len Gasun

Date: 2/26/2023 12:33:00 AM

I love what each letter of happiness stands for in your acrostic my dear friend Paula. Such pure happiness. A very creative and fantastic write my dear friend. Best wishes in the contest. Thanks a lot for sharing. Blessings to you always. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/26/2023 12:23:00 PM

Thanks for your note and for your best wishes. Good to see you. Glad you love my acrostic "Happiness" write. Hugs. Have a happy/blessed day........................

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/25/2023 10:18:00 PM

Those were the days, Paula, love the theme and the poetry..Harry

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/26/2023 12:19:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you love my Happiness/Birthday write. Yes, those were the days. A birthday is a very happy time. Have a happy/blessed day........................

Pashang Salehi

Date: 2/25/2023 6:03:00 PM

I like every letter of your happiness...

Pashang Salehi
Date: 2/26/2023 2:28:00 PM

Always...

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/26/2023 12:16:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you like every letter in my happiness write. Have a happy/blessed day........................

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/25/2023 1:43:00 PM

It's party time--much enjoyed the happy vibes of your poem, Paula. Best to you for a win.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/26/2023 12:14:00 PM

Thanks for your note and for your best. Good to see you. Yes, it's party time. Glad you enjoyed this fun Birthday Party I wrote about. Have a happy/blessed day........................

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/25/2023 11:59:00 AM

Wow~~ A birthday party. I wonder if for you or someone else in the family. This one reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/26/2023 12:13:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed this fun Birthday write for my son. Have a happy/blessed day........................

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 2/25/2023 10:27:00 AM

Birthday parties are among the happiest of times. Your poem expresses the sentiment with lively images of gaiety and fun. Have a wonderful day. :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/26/2023 12:11:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you like my Birthday Party write. A birthday is a very happy time. Have a happy/blessed day........................