Happiness

Helium fills the colorful balloons
And the party will be this afternoon
Party is fun for everyone
Plenty of great food and gifts for my son
Ice cream with extra chocolate cake
Nice to see the family talking out by the lake
Everyone is having a good time
Some are even reciting a rhyme
Singing Happy Birthday out loud will be sublime
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Goldsmith Avatar
July 9, 2023 at 9:19 AM
Happiness~Date Written: 2/25/2023~"2 Place"~Note: Acrostic Rhyme
Sparrow Avatar
July 8, 2023 at 7:25 PM
A rhyming acrostic! Wonderfully done! It sounds like a wonderful birthday celebration.
Goldsmith Avatar
July 9, 2023 at 9:21 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my Acrostic Rhyme "Happiness" write. I enjoy writing this style of poems. Have a happy/blessed day........................
La France Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 1:14 AM
Paula, wonderful Acrostic and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - H Words, well done, blessings, Constance
Goldsmith Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 6:28 AM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed my Acrostic "Happiness" write. It is an honor to have this win in your Writing Challenge - H Words. Thanks for having this fun contest. I enjoyed writing this one. Have a happy/blessed day........................
Gasun Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 7:50 AM
Still loving this stellar happiness acrostic poem of yours my dear friend. Coming back to give my warmest Congratulations on your win! Blessings to you always. Hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 6:24 AM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Good to see you back again. Glad you love my fun "Happiness" write. Hugs. Have a happy/blessed day........................
Messina Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 6:48 PM
Very sweet, Paula. Congratulations on your placement in the contest! ...and "Happy Birthday" to your son! Charlie
Goldsmith Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 6:22 AM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed my write. I say, "Happy Birthday" to everyone. Have a happy/blessed day........................
Rose  Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 6:34 PM
What an amazing acrostic Paula, congrats on your win :)
Goldsmith Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 6:20 AM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed my Acrostic write. It was fun to write. Have a happy/blessed day........................
Edmonds  Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 3:42 PM
Lovely Paula Happy Birthday to your son. Congratulations on your win in Constance’s contest… Belle
Goldsmith Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 6:03 AM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed my fun write. "Happy Birthday" to everyone. Have a happy/blessed day........................
Andresen Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 10:11 AM
- Back with a congratulations, Paula :) - hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 2:19 PM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Good to see you back again. Hugs. Have a happy/blessed day........................
Poet Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 9:50 AM
Congratulations, Paula, on your podium win; your poem is so lovely, and I like the way you depicted the striking metaphors.
Goldsmith Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 2:18 PM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed this fun "Happiness" write. Have a happy/blessed day........................
Peck Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 9:46 AM
Such a sweet, happy poem, just full of great images! Congratulations!
Goldsmith Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 2:16 PM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Good to see you. Glad you like my fun "Happiness" write. Everyone loves a fun birthday party. Have a happy/blessed day........................
Kaufman Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 8:02 AM
This was a happy write for sure. Enjoyed.
Goldsmith Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 2:12 PM
Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed my "Happiness" write. Have a happy/blessed day........................
McBride  Avatar
February 27, 2023 at 5:15 PM
This is great my friend, amazing work putting this poem together, like an art piece, love it : )
Goldsmith Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 2:00 PM
Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you love my fun write. It did take extra time/thought. Everyone loves a party~birthday. Have a happy/blessed day........................
Andresen Avatar
February 27, 2023 at 6:41 AM
- A lovely birthday party, Paula :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
February 27, 2023 at 12:46 PM
Thanks for your note and for your good luck. Good to see you. Glad you like my fun "Happiness" write. Everyone loves a birthday party. Hugs. Have a happy/blessed day........................
George Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 10:18 PM
A delightful Acrostic ! Great family time. All the Best dear Paula !
Goldsmith Avatar
February 27, 2023 at 12:46 PM
Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed this "Happiness" party Acrostic write. I enjoyed bring it to life. Have a happy/blessed day........................
Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 8:01 PM
You did well on this poem. So Wonderful ... Many people like parties.
Goldsmith Avatar
February 27, 2023 at 12:45 PM
Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed this fun party write. All ages love a birthday party. Hooray!!! Have a happy/blessed day........................
Romios Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 11:06 AM
Dazzling with Delight, Paula. A beauty, this is. Panagiota
Goldsmith Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 12:29 PM
Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed my "Happiness" Acrostic Rhyme write. It was fun to do. Hope you are OK. Have a happy/blessed day..............
Dietrich Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 10:12 AM
Nothing like a happy party. Good one, Paula.
Goldsmith Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 12:25 PM
Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you like my happiness write. I enjoyed bring it to life. Have a happy/blessed day........................
Sands Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 5:15 AM
This is special. I enjoyed it Paula :)
Goldsmith Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 12:24 PM
Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed this fun "Happiness" write. Have a happy/blessed day........................
Gasun Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 12:33 AM
I love what each letter of happiness stands for in your acrostic my dear friend Paula. Such pure happiness. A very creative and fantastic write my dear friend. Best wishes in the contest. Thanks a lot for sharing. Blessings to you always. Hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 12:23 PM
Thanks for your note and for your best wishes. Good to see you. Glad you love my acrostic "Happiness" write. Hugs. Have a happy/blessed day........................
Horsman Avatar
February 25, 2023 at 10:18 PM
Those were the days, Paula, love the theme and the poetry..Harry
Goldsmith Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 12:19 PM
Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you love my Happiness/Birthday write. Yes, those were the days. A birthday is a very happy time. Have a happy/blessed day........................
Salehi Avatar
February 25, 2023 at 6:03 PM
I like every letter of your happiness...
Salehi Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 2:28 PM
Always...
Goldsmith Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 12:16 PM
Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you like  every letter in my happiness write. Have a happy/blessed day........................
Pandit Avatar
February 25, 2023 at 1:43 PM
It's party time--much enjoyed the happy vibes of your poem, Paula. Best to you for a win.
Goldsmith Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 12:14 PM
Thanks for your note and for your best. Good to see you. Yes, it's party time. Glad you enjoyed this fun  Birthday Party I wrote about. Have a happy/blessed day........................
Kendrick Avatar
February 25, 2023 at 11:59 AM
Wow~~ A birthday party. I wonder if for you or someone else in the family. This one reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
Goldsmith Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 12:13 PM
Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed this fun Birthday write for my son. Have a happy/blessed day........................
Buehler Avatar
February 25, 2023 at 10:27 AM
Birthday parties are among the happiest of times. Your poem expresses the sentiment with lively images of gaiety and fun. Have a wonderful day. :)
Goldsmith Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 12:11 PM
Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you like my Birthday Party write. A birthday is a very happy time. Have a happy/blessed day........................
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