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Happiness

Helium fills the colorful balloons
And the party will be this afternoon
Party is fun for everyone
Plenty of great food and gifts for my son
Ice cream with extra chocolate cake
Nice to see the family talking out by the lake
Everyone is having a good time
Some are even reciting a rhyme
Singing Happy Birthday out loud will be sublime

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Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/9/2023 9:19:00 AM Happiness~Date Written: 2/25/2023~"2 Place"~Note: Acrostic Rhyme Login to Reply

Katharine L. Sparrow Date: 7/8/2023 7:25:00 PM A rhyming acrostic! Wonderfully done! It sounds like a wonderful birthday celebration. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/9/2023 9:21:00 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my Acrostic Rhyme "Happiness" write. I enjoy writing this style of poems. Have a happy/blessed day........................

Constance La France Date: 3/2/2023 1:14:00 AM Paula, wonderful Acrostic and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - H Words, well done, blessings, Constance Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/2/2023 6:28:00 AM Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed my Acrostic "Happiness" write. It is an honor to have this win in your Writing Challenge - H Words. Thanks for having this fun contest. I enjoyed writing this one. Have a happy/blessed day........................

Len Gasun Date: 3/1/2023 7:50:00 AM Still loving this stellar happiness acrostic poem of yours my dear friend. Coming back to give my warmest Congratulations on your win! Blessings to you always. Hugs Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/2/2023 6:24:00 AM Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Good to see you back again. Glad you love my fun "Happiness" write. Hugs. Have a happy/blessed day........................

Charles Messina Date: 2/28/2023 6:48:00 PM Very sweet, Paula. Congratulations on your placement in the contest! ...and "Happy Birthday" to your son! Charlie Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/2/2023 6:22:00 AM Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed my write. I say, "Happy Birthday" to everyone. Have a happy/blessed day........................

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 2/28/2023 6:34:00 PM What an amazing acrostic Paula, congrats on your win :) Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/2/2023 6:20:00 AM Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed my Acrostic write. It was fun to write. Have a happy/blessed day........................

Beryl Edmonds Date: 2/28/2023 3:42:00 PM Lovely Paula Happy Birthday to your son. Congratulations on your win in Constance’s contest… Belle Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/2/2023 6:03:00 AM Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed my fun write. "Happy Birthday" to everyone. Have a happy/blessed day........................

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/28/2023 10:11:00 AM - Back with a congratulations, Paula :) - hugs Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 2/28/2023 2:19:00 PM Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Good to see you back again. Hugs. Have a happy/blessed day........................

Sotto Poet Date: 2/28/2023 9:50:00 AM Congratulations, Paula, on your podium win; your poem is so lovely, and I like the way you depicted the striking metaphors. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 2/28/2023 2:18:00 PM Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed this fun "Happiness" write. Have a happy/blessed day........................

Ann Peck Date: 2/28/2023 9:46:00 AM Such a sweet, happy poem, just full of great images! Congratulations! Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 2/28/2023 2:16:00 PM Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Good to see you. Glad you like my fun "Happiness" write. Everyone loves a fun birthday party. Have a happy/blessed day........................

Nancy Kaufman Date: 2/28/2023 8:02:00 AM This was a happy write for sure. Enjoyed. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 2/28/2023 2:12:00 PM Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed my "Happiness" write. Have a happy/blessed day........................

Stephan McBride Date: 2/27/2023 5:15:00 PM This is great my friend, amazing work putting this poem together, like an art piece, love it : ) Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 2/28/2023 2:00:00 PM Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you love my fun write. It did take extra time/thought. Everyone loves a party~birthday. Have a happy/blessed day........................

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/27/2023 6:41:00 AM - A lovely birthday party, Paula :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 2/27/2023 12:46:00 PM Thanks for your note and for your good luck. Good to see you. Glad you like my fun "Happiness" write. Everyone loves a birthday party. Hugs. Have a happy/blessed day........................

Valsa George Date: 2/26/2023 10:18:00 PM A delightful Acrostic ! Great family time. All the Best dear Paula ! Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 2/27/2023 12:46:00 PM Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed this "Happiness" party Acrostic write. I enjoyed bring it to life. Have a happy/blessed day........................

Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris Date: 2/26/2023 8:01:00 PM You did well on this poem. So Wonderful ... Many people like parties. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 2/27/2023 12:45:00 PM Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed this fun party write. All ages love a birthday party. Hooray!!! Have a happy/blessed day........................

Panagiota Romios Date: 2/26/2023 11:06:00 AM Dazzling with Delight, Paula. A beauty, this is. Panagiota Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 2/26/2023 12:29:00 PM Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed my "Happiness" Acrostic Rhyme write. It was fun to do. Hope you are OK. Have a happy/blessed day..............

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/26/2023 10:12:00 AM Nothing like a happy party. Good one, Paula. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 2/26/2023 12:25:00 PM Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you like my happiness write. I enjoyed bring it to life. Have a happy/blessed day........................

Heidi Sands Date: 2/26/2023 5:15:00 AM This is special. I enjoyed it Paula :) Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 2/26/2023 12:24:00 PM Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed this fun "Happiness" write. Have a happy/blessed day........................

Len Gasun Date: 2/26/2023 12:33:00 AM I love what each letter of happiness stands for in your acrostic my dear friend Paula. Such pure happiness. A very creative and fantastic write my dear friend. Best wishes in the contest. Thanks a lot for sharing. Blessings to you always. Hugs Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 2/26/2023 12:23:00 PM Thanks for your note and for your best wishes. Good to see you. Glad you love my acrostic "Happiness" write. Hugs. Have a happy/blessed day........................

Harry Horsman Date: 2/25/2023 10:18:00 PM Those were the days, Paula, love the theme and the poetry..Harry Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 2/26/2023 12:19:00 PM Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you love my Happiness/Birthday write. Yes, those were the days. A birthday is a very happy time. Have a happy/blessed day........................

Pashang Salehi Date: 2/25/2023 6:03:00 PM I like every letter of your happiness... Login to Reply Pashang Salehi Date: 2/26/2023 2:28:00 PM Always... Paula Goldsmith Date: 2/26/2023 12:16:00 PM Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you like  every letter in my happiness write. Have a happy/blessed day........................

Vijay Pandit Date: 2/25/2023 1:43:00 PM It's party time--much enjoyed the happy vibes of your poem, Paula. Best to you for a win. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 2/26/2023 12:14:00 PM Thanks for your note and for your best. Good to see you. Yes, it's party time. Glad you enjoyed this fun  Birthday Party I wrote about. Have a happy/blessed day........................

Sara Kendrick Date: 2/25/2023 11:59:00 AM Wow~~ A birthday party. I wonder if for you or someone else in the family. This one reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 2/26/2023 12:13:00 PM Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed this fun Birthday write for my son. Have a happy/blessed day........................

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 2/25/2023 10:27:00 AM Birthday parties are among the happiest of times. Your poem expresses the sentiment with lively images of gaiety and fun. Have a wonderful day. :) Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 2/26/2023 12:11:00 PM Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you like my Birthday Party write. A birthday is a very happy time. Have a happy/blessed day........................