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Happiness -Acrostic

~Happiness~ Playing with my goldfisH Singing my sorrows away with an AlleluiA I am happy with your warm friendshiP Licking a lollypoP I find happiness in the quotes of rumI Out of the world it takes me, being with you for no reasoN When I talk to the silence of my solitudE On a clear night when I count starS You are happiness mom, daily when you feed me with your handS -puvi- 15/12/2015 Thank you John Derek Hamilton (Sponsor of the contest) for getting me notified about the contest. Let me share a WONDERFUL SWEET COINCIDENTAL MESSAGE which I got right now while writing this poem after reading about the contest: "OF ALL THE GIFTS YOU RECEIVE FROM GOD, THE GREATEST ONE IS CONTENTMENT...HAPPINESS...THIS IS THE SUPREME BLESSING OF THE LORD"

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Liam Mcdaid

Date: 1/3/2016 3:23:00 PM

reading this again yeah even the coldness of a stone can become warm when love holds a heart inside happiness held as a treasure gift in beauties eyes inspirational thought i pray peace and love forever holds you

Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 1/5/2016 7:14:00 PM

thats so very sweet of you :)) God bless..take care

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 12/28/2015 8:28:00 PM

excellent piece of happiness sings in your words

Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 12/28/2015 8:48:00 PM

i find happiness in everything, every silly thing, even a piece of stone can make me go hell of happy...;)) it all depends on the serene love that we carry within, i think :)) thank you for the love and comment liam...love and peace to you :))

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 12/17/2015 8:25:00 AM

Remnants, different way to do the acrostic but impressive, Have a Happy Holiday! Lovely message and likewise to you..Smiles, Olive ELoisa =`)

Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 12/17/2015 9:14:00 PM

Thank you OLIVE for your time and a lovely comment..wishing you a merry christmas in advance :)) love and peace.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/17/2015 7:45:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your end-line version of an Acrostic..Reads like a winner..Thanks for stopping by..SK

Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 12/17/2015 9:12:00 PM

Thank you SK for your time and lovely comment..i value it :))

Kevin Leake

Date: 12/15/2015 2:08:00 PM

Like it, very well done Acrostic, I tried one and they are quite hard to do in reverse!! Enjoyed Best Wishes Kevin

Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 12/15/2015 9:46:00 PM

thank you Kevin for your time and the encouraging comment :) Glad that you liked it :)) Love and peace