Happily Ever After-W

Here is the love story of Zhi Nu and Niu Lang
A romantic ancient Chinese tale of very long 
Zhi was a nymph and Niu Lang was a cowherd
Cowherd-nymph love forbidden,secretly wedded.

Had two children, but their happy life ended.
As by the goddess Wang  they were detected.
The goddess took Zhi Nu back to the heaven 
Niu Lang chased them with his two children.

They were blocked by the milky way- sky river
And the children kept crying for their mother,
Shouting her name, Niu and children wandered
By their pain and grief, the goddess was moved.

She allowed them to meet one day in a year
Could be seen in the sky as Altair and Vega star
They meet and live happily ever after for a day.
Day celebrated as Qixi- Chinese valentine day.

Wish I had a beloved like the nymph Zhi Nu fair
So that I can live in the sky with immortal affair.
Like William Blake would say "Death be not proud"
I would have said unlike Blake "Life be proud". 

II
Yet another story of Yeh-Shen, the orphan girl
A Chinese Cinderella living with stepmother cruel
She had a friend, a fish living in a nearby river
Once the fish was killed by her cruel stepmother.

Yeh-Shen was very unhappy for of her friend dead.
An old man told her that bones of fish were powered
One day she talked to the bones of her fish friend
Then eventually Yeh-Shen in a beauty transformed.

Once she visited the king’s palace, the king saw her
They were married soon, lived happily ever after.


Wish I was tiger as friend with cruel stepmother
So I could enjoy good things at this age forever.
Wish I was a sculptor like Pygmalion, not a poet
Make alive ivory Galatea by grace of Aphrodite
Married her blessed with the happiness and love
And to have enjoyed long and blissful life to live
                         **********

*Based on Greek and Chinese fairy tales of Pygmalion-Galatea, Zhi Nu and Niu Lang
and Yeh-Shen
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Fifth place winner in:
Contest: Happily ever after sponsored by John heck

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 12/2/2012 7:05:00 PM
Dr Ram..., .. it is nice to read this oldie and goody . :-) congrats with your wonderful win,, in the "Happily Ever After" contest.. always~ PD
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Date: 12/31/2010 2:19:00 AM
really funny!! happy cheers on your win, dr. ram.. huggs, nette
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Date: 12/30/2010 10:38:00 PM
Very imaginative write. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 12/30/2010 5:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your win...Sara
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Date: 12/30/2010 7:36:00 AM
I sure enjoyed this one Dr Ram..congrats. BG
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Date: 12/30/2010 6:01:00 AM
Congrats Dr. Ram on your super win in John's contest with this awesome entry my friend so totally entertaining a write.. enjoy with luv and wishing u the very best Happy New year from all of us here in the Garden State ..with luv..always...
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Date: 12/30/2010 5:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement Dr. Ram in John Heck's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/30/2010 4:21:00 AM
Many congratulations for this well deserved win dearest Dr. Ram. A very happy New year to you and your Family.
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Date: 12/13/2010 12:39:00 PM
Hi. Thanking you for your kind comments. Great work this. The ability that you have to develop a fable into your work is wonderful. Best of luck in the contest. Eamon
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Date: 12/13/2010 8:00:00 AM
enjoyed reading your work and history of the fairy tales. You always amaze!
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Date: 12/13/2010 6:04:00 AM
I love this type of story telling for tales often get lost. Good luck in the contest with this wonderful write. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 12/12/2010 10:30:00 PM
you seem to be spinning it so well i was engrossed like a child here...hehe lovely end..sunkan
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Date: 12/12/2010 12:54:00 PM
WOW what a terrific read.Very entertaining thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.Thanks also for the kind comment and it's poets like you that gives us all inspiration.Teresa
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Date: 12/12/2010 8:08:00 AM
Well good luck in the contest with this one .. John will flip over this entry .. amazing tale told in poetry Dr. Ram... a wonderful piece my friend.. enjoyed ...
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Date: 12/12/2010 2:40:00 AM
Interesting stories, Dr. Ram. I wonder if you would check out my first blog posting. Many blessings,
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Date: 12/11/2010 11:00:00 PM
Dear Dr Ram i sent you some soup mail some days ago, just realized you may be like and do not check often.
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Date: 12/11/2010 8:33:00 PM
Thanks Dr. Ram. Appreciate your comments. Blessings, Joy (Jew)
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Date: 12/11/2010 5:44:00 PM
Interesting how you tie these legends together with your own thoughts and qutoes by poets like William Blake. Very cool, LIfe be proud!! You be the man, Dr. Ram. Luv,Andrea
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Date: 12/11/2010 3:09:00 PM
Great poetry my friend, your work inspires me to strive for more with my writing... thank you Michael
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Date: 12/11/2010 2:39:00 PM
Good one ...Reads like a winner..Telling the tales of old in poetry form for all to learn of these ancient stories..Sara
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Date: 12/11/2010 1:41:00 PM
Dr. Mehta, So full of wisdom and creativity... I enjoy your work. I'm uplifted and full of new knowledge each time I read what you have penned. Thank you for continuing to educate and inspire me...and thank you for your kind words as always. Lay
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Date: 12/11/2010 10:30:00 AM
very well crafted work, two different culture based storys working well captivate the imagination, Dr Ram
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Date: 12/11/2010 10:16:00 AM
Hello Dr. Mehta, Once again you have made my morning, these are such wonderful Stories. I enjoyed them Winner..... As Always, Shar
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Date: 12/11/2010 9:30:00 AM
Very nice story rendered in a beautiful way through poetic lines Sir
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Date: 12/11/2010 9:27:00 AM
Great poem!, and thank you for your comment. Much appreciated!
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