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Hapless

That robot on line is so crafty! Pick a number, he says; make it snappy! Or go to the App He'll get nowhere with that; He should know by now I'm un-appy!

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Jim Slaughter

Date: 12/14/2022 11:12:00 AM

Join the club! Funny lim, though, E.

Elizabeth Mccann
Date: 12/14/2022 1:45:00 PM

Fortunately I have a granddaughter! Of course now I have to devise a language to talk to her! Thanks so much for the comment. Elizabeth

Line Gauthier

Date: 12/12/2022 6:06:00 AM

Charming and witty, Elizabeth ~

Elizabeth Mccann
Date: 12/14/2022 1:46:00 PM

So good of you to comment. I was feeling down today and that pepped me up! Elizabeth

Rico Leffanta

Date: 11/14/2022 10:28:00 AM

clever! Aloha!

Elizabeth Mccann
Date: 11/14/2022 12:47:00 PM

Thank you! Eliz.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/13/2022 10:14:00 PM

With robots around, we would be un-appy.

Elizabeth Mccann
Date: 11/14/2022 12:48:00 PM

Feels uncomfortable to me, too. Elizabeth

L Milton Hankins

Date: 11/13/2022 8:00:00 PM

Loved your rhymes, Elizabeth. I'm afraid the wave of the future is, indeed, robots!

Elizabeth Mccann
Date: 11/14/2022 2:13:00 AM

Thank you, Milton. I'm sure you're right! Frightening, no? Elizabeth

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/13/2022 6:55:00 PM

My fair lady! I'm un-appy that you are not appy! Keep smiling, gw

Elizabeth Mccann
Date: 11/14/2022 2:09:00 AM

Dear Boy! Keep smiling! Liz