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For Joseph May's Palindrome limerick contest

'Hannah' thought she was a baby blue 'tit', would 'toot' at dawn searching for a titbit. Sounded more like a 'tut tut,' so her 'mama' smacked her but. Now she goes baa baa, like a 'ewe' misfit. 'Hannah' bought a small 'racecar' for her 'mum,' but her 'mama' had a very big tum. At first it was 'wow' and 'yay,' but then' tut tut' and no way! Trapped her 'boob', when seat got stuck to her bum.

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Joseph May

Date: 6/1/2024 6:25:00 AM

Lol, Very nicely done Silent, Congrats on your win

Len Gasun

Date: 5/31/2024 9:12:00 PM

Wow! This is an excellent and delightful limerick my dear poet friend SO. You did this limerick extra-ordinarily well with ease. I love this a lot and enjoyed. Thank you for sharing and the smiles. Big Congrats on your top win! Hugs.. God bless you always and your writings.

Tonye George

Date: 5/25/2024 9:44:00 AM

I sang along. I have a terrible voice but I enjoyed the rhymes and flow. Haha. Great one Silent, as always. I have never found my way around Limerick though.

Paul Bell

Date: 5/23/2024 7:22:00 AM

Loving Hannah by the day, blue tit or not. I'm sure she knew her mum would get stuck, singing to herself. Tum, boob, and bum, that's my stupid mum.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 5/20/2024 6:19:00 AM

SO, very impressive and cute creation. It's not easy when there are extra demands. It takes one heck of an imagination and a lot of brain power to do this. I am in awe.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/19/2024 4:43:00 AM

Creative one. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Your visit to my page was delightful. Sara K

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/18/2024 7:59:00 AM

A limerick that is inventive and enjoyable. The usage of palindromes in this context is remarkable. This piece of writing is somewhat apart from your typical style, as it showcases your humorous side. Good luck with this contest!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/18/2024 7:29:00 AM

A rare limerick from you! chuckling :)

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 5/18/2024 5:29:00 AM

creative and entertaining Limerick. Best wishes with this contest entry! enjoy your day, Sara

Ink Empress

Date: 5/18/2024 2:17:00 AM

Her mama had a big tum! Lolol thats cute and funny! Great use of palindromes here. Very different to your usual writes. But you somehow nailed it . I love the flow of wordplay and rhymes here and the storytelling! I especially loved the line “ Now she goes baa baa, like a 'ewe' misfit.” lol! Creative one silent one! Im sure this will do well in the contest, i might try this too lets see! Best wishes! Always a pleasure reading your work! Sending you light!