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Happy Ramadan. Hah. Hangry stars, I plan on staying silent more this month. ;) A little monoku inspired by us that observe fasting.

stitching my lips with neon nylon ~ the worm moon foresees hangry stars

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Lioness Onpaper

Date: 3/12/2024 3:12:00 AM

Happy Ramadan papi… love this monokooo… stitching my lips with neon nylon mmmm the way u use elements are just soo elegant!!! the worm moon foresees hangry stars Aaaaaah the hangry stars r amazing!!! I love me a good hangry star… my hangry star was cleaning yesterday aee … of almost 5 or 6 years of living with this star only yesterday I was the star touch a broom n clean out of hangryness…

Ink Empress
Date: 3/12/2024 3:52:00 AM

Lolol haha maybe they are spring cleaning

Duke Beaufort

Date: 3/11/2024 7:22:00 PM

IE, A nice way to express the feeling of celebrating life with a little restraint and pleasure mixed together. I wish you a wonderful time and if you are restrained to write, will miss what you have to say.

Ink Empress
Date: 3/12/2024 3:51:00 AM

You are so kind and i appreciate your comments on all my poems, so generous of you to read every poem and comment so sincerely. Thank you so very much truly

Daniel Caplin

Date: 3/11/2024 10:25:00 AM

Hello Ink Impress , fascinating and beautiful , perfection in words , just don't eat them . Stay safe . Daniel

Ink Empress
Date: 3/11/2024 11:35:00 AM

Thank you daniel.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/11/2024 8:57:00 AM

Dearest Empress, Your Monoku is a striking snapshot of hunger and anticipation. The juxtaposition of stitching lips with neon nylon against the "worm moon" backdrop creates an exciting and intriguing image. It captures the intense feeling of hunger with a touch of cosmic whimsy. My Empress, Well done on crafting such a concise and evocative piece. Happy Ramadan my friend, - Blessings, Daniel

Ink Empress
Date: 3/11/2024 10:02:00 AM

Ah thank you so much that’s so kind of you to leave your well wishes dear daniel, you are very generous and very thoughtful. Im grateful for your support

Silent One

Date: 3/11/2024 7:42:00 AM

Happy Ramadan, I hope it is a beautiful and spiritual experience for you.. I know it is not just about going hungry, it is about connecting to your creator... I hope you will still write your poetry, as we would miss that... You are always sweet and patient anyway, so I am sure you would not be grumpy at all... Lovely one liner and have a blessed month...

Ink Empress
Date: 3/11/2024 7:44:00 AM

Haha this made me laugh. Im always grumpy: but today was fine as its abt connecting spiritually like u said; lolol i plan on being the silent one: :) thank you for the wish so sweet

Deb M

Date: 3/11/2024 7:32:00 AM

Awww l will miss your sweetness on P.S sweet Ink…..don't get too Hangry! Happy Ramadan!! Debx

Ink Empress
Date: 3/11/2024 7:41:00 AM

Awwn sweet debx, you are so sweet and cute: haha i wasnt hangry today thankfully: lolol but i bet many were: i will still be here, writing. Sending you light always

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/11/2024 6:22:00 AM

Always enlightening to spent time in prayer and reflection. Hope you visit when you can. Wishing you Happy Ramadan!

Ink Empress
Date: 3/11/2024 6:40:00 AM

Thank you Vijay. So kind of you to wish happy ramadan, only one here that actually did. I appreciate that. But i will be here on soup its just i choose to stay silent in real life lol hah. Grateful for your well wishes

Tom Woody

Date: 3/11/2024 6:15:00 AM

We'll miss ya. Who knew there were worms on the moon? ;)

Ink Empress
Date: 3/11/2024 6:41:00 AM

Haha worm moon it is this month, which is named after agriculture and arrival of spring it seems . I am still here just silent in real life more. Thank you for your visit

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/11/2024 5:41:00 AM

loved this Monoku! So creative. "Worm moon" is priceless. Have a great day, Sara

Ink Empress
Date: 3/11/2024 6:42:00 AM

Ah its always nice that you do know the names of different moons. So cool thank you dear sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/11/2024 4:36:00 AM

- A quiet month... "stitching my lips with neon nylon" ... the spring months are a time for song, Ink :) - Spring is in an early start phase here... still frost at night... the cherry tree is not in bloom yet - hugs

Ink Empress
Date: 3/11/2024 6:43:00 AM

Haha awwn anne lise hangry stars wont like me singing . Pls do take some pictures when cherry tree is in bloom. Sending you light

The Aura Rhymes

Date: 3/11/2024 3:25:00 AM

Lol hangry sounds fun . I’m also going to do the same .

Ink Empress
Date: 3/11/2024 4:34:00 AM

Awwn yes lol happy ramadan