Notes About The Poem

Hanging Wash

Wind
sends out
a clever 
breeze, who finds us
at our schoolwork, near Mother's hanging wash

Snapping back the corners of clean white sheets,
it tumbles off
to tell her
what we
know
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Sambourne Avatar
February 22, 2022 at 6:57 AM
Beautifully expressed. Such fine poetry in strong images + personification. Your poetry soars. Sincerely, Brian
Agustin Avatar
December 7, 2020 at 4:42 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
Harding Avatar
December 15, 2020 at 1:17 PM
Thank you, Beata! xoxo LyLy
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December 7, 2020 at 3:21 AM
- Congratulations on your beautiful win, Lycia :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Harding Avatar
December 15, 2020 at 1:18 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise! xoxo LyLy
Fowler Avatar
December 6, 2020 at 10:26 AM
Lovely Lycia. Congratulations on the win! Linda
Harding Avatar
December 15, 2020 at 1:18 PM
Thank you, Linda! xoxo LyLy
Ashley Avatar
December 5, 2020 at 8:43 PM
Lycia, your lovely imagery brings the picture to life. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Eve's contest.. ~Susan
Harding Avatar
December 15, 2020 at 1:19 PM
Thank you, Susan! xoxo LyLy
Allison Avatar
December 5, 2020 at 4:32 PM
I dont need an image to visualize this, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Harding Avatar
December 15, 2020 at 1:19 PM
Thank you, Jan! xoxo LyLy
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December 5, 2020 at 12:46 AM
Congratulations on your winning placement.
Harding Avatar
December 15, 2020 at 1:20 PM
Thank you, Joanna! xoxo LyLy
Roper Avatar
December 4, 2020 at 10:40 PM
Congratulations on your winning placement. Thank you for participating in the contest. Hugs Eve
Harding Avatar
December 15, 2020 at 1:21 PM
Thank you, for the placement, Eve. Very fun and challenging contest! xoxo LyLy
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