Hanging In There

Our Hannah with her snaggle tooth
Is prettier and that's the truth
Than any sultry movie star
Who gets her beauty from a jar.

She's just turned six years old and so
Her baby teeth are primed to go;
But one, reluctant to vamoose,
Just hangs in there, relaxed and loose. 

Our Hannah doesn't seem to mind,
She is not the conceited  kind
And has more things to think about
Than a laggard tooth, that won't fall out.

Those who have offered her assistance
Have met with six-year old resistance
And though our Hannah isn't vain
She has a low threshold for pain.

If you chance to see beguiling grin,
With a tooth that is more out than in,
You have seen our Hannah, there's no doubt.
With her baby tooth that won't fall out.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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April 6, 2009 at 4:42 AM
excellent writing .. your writing about Hannah is really cute! ~ Arany
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April 5, 2009 at 6:15 PM
Enjoyed this,the smile says it all.Well written you have captured us all at less than our teethless perfect.There is something infectional about an inocent snaggle toothed grin........Jim
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April 5, 2009 at 5:51 PM
Just when we need a pick up, along comes Joyce with another uplifting, witty poem! Thank you for brightening my day! Hannah must bring great joy to your life.
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April 5, 2009 at 4:56 PM
So true to life which makes it all the more meaningful. Love the last verse.
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