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Hanging In There

Our Hannah with her snaggle tooth Is prettier and that's the truth Than any sultry movie star Who gets her beauty from a jar. She's just turned six years old and so Her baby teeth are primed to go; But one, reluctant to vamoose, Just hangs in there, relaxed and loose. Our Hannah doesn't seem to mind, She is not the conceited kind And has more things to think about Than a laggard tooth, that won't fall out. Those who have offered her assistance Have met with six-year old resistance And though our Hannah isn't vain She has a low threshold for pain. If you chance to see beguiling grin, With a tooth that is more out than in, You have seen our Hannah, there's no doubt. With her baby tooth that won't fall out.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/6/2009 4:42:00 AM
excellent writing .. your writing about Hannah is really cute! ~ Arany
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Date: 4/5/2009 6:15:00 PM
Enjoyed this,the smile says it all.Well written you have captured us all at less than our teethless perfect.There is something infectional about an inocent snaggle toothed grin........Jim
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Date: 4/5/2009 5:51:00 PM
Just when we need a pick up, along comes Joyce with another uplifting, witty poem! Thank you for brightening my day! Hannah must bring great joy to your life.
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Date: 4/5/2009 4:56:00 PM
So true to life which makes it all the more meaningful. Love the last verse.
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