Hanging Around

he kept his legs crossed so the mystery of the kilt would not be revealed

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Funom Makama

Date: 4/20/2015 8:14:00 AM

great poem. As promised, I returned and I am glad I did because the freshness of your talents are yet again exhibited through these wonderful lines. Definitely a 7

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/20/2015 8:53:00 AM

Thanks Funom, just a bit of silliness.

Darlene Gifford

Date: 4/12/2015 1:03:00 PM

Mysteries are good! Let them keep theirs and I'll keep mine. Under garments : To wear or not to wear? That is our secret! And for one, I'll never tell!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/13/2015 8:14:00 AM

Ha ha, thanks Darlene.

Viv Wigley

Date: 4/11/2015 12:22:00 AM

A man of mystery. Do you know how to tell what Clan a Scotsman is? Simply look under his kilt, and if he's got two quarter pounders, he's a MacDonald. Nice work, Richard.Regards, Viv

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/13/2015 8:15:00 AM

Best comment ever!!!