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Hands of Time

Take a leave, monstrous Time And bury your hands in a compass… My being dwells in frustration When calibrated minutes pass Like a waft robbing my leisure, My night's pleasure: your rigid ticks And clicks bite hour's glory; While precious snapshots of my life Are murderously gone, gone! How can those gripping fists plunder All the nectar of summer’s bloom In one grasp of your thief-like hands? That with arrogance, I am left alone Wailing in the sudden halt of midnight As the love I cherish is snuffed in one flip. I shall defer to these rude commands, If only to curb my angst , for now, now; Till godly fate redeems me with grace from your deplorable , covetous enslavement. Contest of Line Gauthier: Another 2017 Stunner Previously written 9/22/2017 Repost 4/19/2018

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Date: 4/20/2018 4:18:00 PM
I like this for the way it poses time as a despot-- the 2nd stanza is especially strong-- congrats on your win, Nette!
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Date: 4/20/2018 4:50:00 AM
- A great 3rd place in the contest, congratulations, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/19/2018 10:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this dramatic poem about time. Great imagery and emotional turmoil described.
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Date: 4/19/2018 5:31:00 PM
Thanks, nette, for entering my contest with this 'time sensitive' poem. Congrats on your bronze medal win.
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Date: 9/24/2017 2:49:00 AM
Impressive, touching and stunning verses proving much talent .Enjoying the ” nectar of summer’s bloom” from hands of time...
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Date: 9/23/2017 9:15:00 PM
An absolutely beautiful and powerful dramatic write Nette. Your artistic way of conveying your message to monstrous Time amazes and delights me. Good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 9/23/2017 5:11:00 PM
Incredible, Nette: As always your writing is. The graphic is dramatic and conveys a universal message we all feel at the relentless hands of time. Well done, Best, SuZ
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Date: 9/22/2017 3:40:00 PM
A passionate plea to hands of time--well written as always!
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Date: 9/22/2017 3:21:00 PM
- A great choice of words in this dramatic writing, Nette - Luck in the contest - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/22/2017 2:40:00 PM
Wow! Nette, this is dramatic and well written. I'm of the saying" Time waits for no one" you conveyed that fact very well. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 9/22/2017 12:46:00 PM
What a dramatic read this one truly is! I surely enjoyed reading this incredible poem this afternoon my friend! this is a masterful piece, such a grand write that I am in awe of it superior grandeur! Great Work!!
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Date: 9/22/2017 12:37:00 PM
Fantastic pen Nette! A stirring read. My best to you in the contest:)
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