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Hands of Time

Cupped within the grasp of mine the chi does swirl a treasure twirling atoms held sublime eternity unmeasured. Reflections lift from hand to eye each limpid surface framed The sky above doest bring a sigh as glorified is His name. A world within two cupped hands A world within each mind Universes do unfold within the scope of time. So taste the waters offered thee and see beyond the farthest sea.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/24/2010 2:43:00 PM
Congratulations, Deb. Another one of yours I had missed!! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 6/24/2010 6:13:00 AM
Congratulations Deborah on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "The Power in Your Hands". Love, Carol
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Date: 6/23/2010 3:19:00 PM
congrats! Deb! stanza 1 is my favorite! very powerful! jimbo
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Date: 6/23/2010 1:46:00 PM
I loved this!! Congrats... Michael
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Date: 6/23/2010 1:18:00 PM
Deborah, many congratulations on your win with this fine poem in Carolyn's contest >> James
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Date: 6/23/2010 12:09:00 PM
sThis is quite lovely. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/23/2010 11:32:00 AM
Each form has a center of life energy. All is one, awesome power. Congratulation on a well written poem's success, Deborah. Agape, Moses
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Date: 6/23/2010 10:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your success in the contest. A very inspiring Sonnet here. Love, Iolanda
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Date: 6/23/2010 9:11:00 AM
Very nice interpretation of the photo, Deborah. Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/21/2010 5:47:00 AM
Great write that you have penned in this one..Excellent metaphoric language used in this one..Very descriptive of the picture..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Sara
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Date: 6/21/2010 5:37:00 AM
All the more interesting for the use of unusual words, I enjoyes your poem
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Date: 6/20/2010 7:45:00 PM
Wonderful writing ;) xo
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Date: 6/20/2010 6:54:00 PM
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Date: 6/20/2010 11:06:00 AM
Lovely poem, if submitted to contest good luck.
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Date: 6/19/2010 7:56:00 PM
Enjoyed...well written!
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Date: 6/19/2010 5:59:00 PM
Magnificent Debbie.. good luck in the contest.. a very in depth write bridging the natural and supernatural realms together into the cupping of hands.. a great one TEACH ..no worries.. a winner.. with luv ..pupil..
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Date: 6/19/2010 5:20:00 PM
I AM READY TO EXPLODE.. HOW DO U ACCESS THE PAGE OF WINNERS FOR LEATHER VOICES CONTEST.. I CLICKED ON PAGE FOUR LIKE ABE TOLD ME BUT I GET A BLANK SCREEN.. WHAT AM I DOING WRONG? I TRIED TO RE DO WICCA.. OH MY GOD... DON'T EVEN LET ME START..IT LEFT OUT HALF THE WORDS.. I DID TRY AGAIN AND AGAIN..NOW PLEASE GET ME TO THE WINNERS SO I CAN CONGRATULATE THEM..PUPIL..THANKXXX
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