Handle With Care

A child's brittle like porcelain Please handle with care As she hardens like a diamond She'll sparkle everywhere

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/1/2021 3:01:00 PM

I like this!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/1/2021 7:41:00 PM

And methinks that it likes you too! Happiness and Joy, Gershon

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/1/2021 9:29:00 AM

"Love This One" A wonderful write. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/1/2021 10:27:00 AM

Appreciated, Paula. Take good care, Gershon

Robert Pettit

Date: 3/31/2021 6:54:00 PM

Good descriptive analogies, and you make it rhyme. This is a short and sweet write.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/1/2021 10:26:00 AM

Thanks, Robert. If I've got time, I can make them rhyme. :) gw