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Hana's Daydream

yonder across the way blowing fragmented pieces tangled roaming free a breeze softy calls her name across divine wind cherry blossoms dance rising aloft touch Mt. Fugi and then gracefully fade away

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Date: 3/30/2025 5:26:00 PM
Are you from the South? My peps are Georgia peps, yonder and y'all and bless her/his heart and grits, etc. are all things I suspect you may have grown up with? I did not, having been born an Army brat, but sure did visit a lot. It's okay if I'm totally wrong about u being Southern, I don't mind being wrong. I enjoyed reading this poem. The imagery painted a picture I saw and emotions I felt. CayCay
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