Hanakotoba

Words are not enough
Language of April showers
Say it with flowers.

Gracious camellia
Daintily posing, but in vain
Begonia lost in thought.

Desirable
Hopes teeming with ambition
Of a stargazer.

From friendship to love
Exchanging yellow petals
With the deepest red.

Delicate beauty
Of hibiscus in full bloom
Inspires iris.

A blushing lilac
Unaware of dawning day
Dreaming of first love.

Bittersweet flower
Ever loyal to the end
Won’t betray a friend.

Parting time is near
Save the memories within
And forget-me-not.

Yellow hyacinth
With a heart that knows no peace
Nest of jealousy.

Morning breeze scatters  
The rich fragrance of jasmine’s  
Deep sensuality.
 
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* Hanakotoba is the language of flowers.
** each flower is bestowed with symbolism & meaning.
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Author: Paul Callus
Contest: Any Poem#21
Sponsor: Poet Destroyer A
Placing: 8th
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dietrich Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 9:31 PM
a very belated congrats on these amazing haiku.
Callus Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 1:27 PM
Thank you Andrea! Belated wishes are as welcome as your visit :)) // paul
May Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 1:13 PM
What does the rose say?...wonderful write and win Paul
May Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 4:14 PM
Ah yes I see...thank you Paul
Callus Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 1:25 PM
The rose, though not mentioned by name, speaks in the 4th haiku. A yellow one stands for friendship...deepest red for love! // thanks for wishes. // paul
Mehta Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 9:50 AM
Congratulation on the fine win with this lovely poem, paul
Callus Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 10:00 AM
So glad to have you visiting again Dr. Ram; thanks for the wishes. // paul
A. Sharma Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 5:57 AM
Wow ! What a great poem ,,, all flowers have words to say but only for we to understand,,,,beyond my imagination,,, simply amazing Paul,,,great win,, congrats !
Callus Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 9:31 AM
Hi Dr. Upma! Thank you for the congrats and lovely comments; so glad you enjoyed this :) // paul
A   Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 9:30 PM
Hello Paul, Congratulations, --Enjoyed your awesome win. Thank you so much for the support... Always & forever *Linda
Callus Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 9:33 AM
Thank you Linda...always looking out for your contests !:) maybe one of these days I'll strike it rich!:):) // paul
Delaney Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 4:10 PM
Enjoyed the meanings of all these flowers. I believe it was quite the custom to incorporate the language of flowers into the posies sent. They called them Tussy Mussies. Good Luck with this lovely portait of flowers. SuZ
Callus Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 4:19 PM
Hi Suzanne! so pleased to have you stopping by :) Thank you for the interesting comments, too. cu // paul
Devonshire Avatar
April 15, 2014 at 3:08 PM
Dear Paul, Amazing use of personification, giving voice and emotions to each flower. Thanks for explaining "Hanakotoba." Indeed, each flower takes on a different meaning. My mother loved begonias. Perhaps she was often lost in thought. Delightful! Best wishes in PD's contest. Carolyn
Callus Avatar
April 15, 2014 at 3:20 PM
Hi Carolyn...you rightly interpret the spirit in which these haiku were written; thank you for the lovely comments; a most appreciated visit :) // paul
Trifiatis Avatar
April 14, 2014 at 7:51 AM
Very well done my friend Paul for now I have learned a lot and since I have got a roof garden it will be handy! thank you!
Callus Avatar
April 14, 2014 at 8:12 AM
Appreciate your lovely comments Demi! Not everyone is that lucky to have a garden; I have one at the back of my house; you at least have one over your head :) // paul
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April 14, 2014 at 5:56 AM
wow!!!! so alluring beauty of flowers and its fragrant.. :D i love flowers.. :) :) the one i love most is the sunflower though not the rose..... wonderfulwrite indeed! God bless dearie Paul.. : ==olive_eloi with wink and smile
Callus Avatar
April 14, 2014 at 7:03 AM
Thank you so much Olive_eloi :) If a flower had to be named after you I'd call it Oleosa :) glad you liked these haiku. cu :):) // paul
Andresen Avatar
April 14, 2014 at 4:27 AM
- A haiku written with flowers, scents, dreams and love --- Just Beautiful, Paul ! - Luck in contest ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Callus Avatar
April 14, 2014 at 5:00 AM
Thank you Anne Lise...you just about summed it all up :) love your ever welcome comments...and visits :) // paul
Dietrich Avatar
April 13, 2014 at 5:05 PM
this is sure to capture PD's heart. lots of color in this one for our spring day!
Callus Avatar
April 14, 2014 at 4:16 AM
Hope it does! Flowers tempt with colours and they all have a message to pass on. txs for stopping by Andrea :) // paul
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