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Halo-Tosis - For Contest

HALO-TOSIS Chained preachers putrid breath of lies extolling the efficacy of fire and brimstone’s scorched souls. 10/30/2015 submitted to – In 5 lines or less #1 – Poetry Contest sponsor – SKAT A

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A. Juman

Date: 11/5/2015 6:39:00 PM

wonderful I love it--Please do check out mines and tell me what you think

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/1/2015 3:06:00 PM

VEry clever title for THIS one, John. Yeah, the fire and brimstone thing. I really hate that!!

John Lawless
Date: 11/1/2015 6:35:00 PM

Thanks Andrea. I got tired of the "bully-god" and the "bully-pulpit" long ago.

Lin Lane

Date: 10/30/2015 4:07:00 PM

I agree, John... it stinks!

John Lawless
Date: 11/1/2015 6:31:00 PM

Yeah, I always thought the incense they spread around was the leftover brimstone....

Jan Allison

Date: 10/30/2015 3:39:00 PM

Very descriptive John -I have only just managed to see the image - you have interpreted it brilliantly! Good luck:-) hugs jan xx

John Lawless
Date: 11/1/2015 6:31:00 PM

...a visual mind....a troubled youth...and VIOLA!! Thanks for reading and commenting Jan.