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Hallucination

HALLUCINATION
That night I felt the skin burn in fever Heart pumping blood to brain more than required I sensed floating on thin air forever Vapor eyes strained to clear vision blurred As they looked through wobbling window outward. A pale figure flickered on window pane Waving hands behind the curling curtain The known old tree turned an apparition A friend long gone came to see me again Mind shaped the past with hallucination.
March 16, 2018.

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Date: 3/23/2018 8:30:00 PM
Warm regards and congrats on a well-deserved Honorable Mention, Subimal - blessings as always, my friend! :-)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/24/2018 12:03:00 AM
Thank you, Greg.
Date: 3/23/2018 12:36:00 PM
Subimal, nicely done verse & great imagery congratulations on your win.. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/24/2018 12:03:00 AM
Thank you, Eve.
Date: 3/22/2018 8:58:00 AM
Congrats, Subimal. Well done.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/24/2018 12:02:00 AM
Thank you, Line.
Date: 3/21/2018 7:16:00 PM
Your poem brought the imagery of your hallucination to life, Subimal. Well-written, and congratulations on your HM in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/22/2018 3:00:00 AM
Thank you, Sandra for your appreciating comments.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/22/2018 3:00:00 AM
Thank you, Sandra for your appreciating comments.

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