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I put a pumpkin on my porch outside, and he had a hideous face; I prepared the many treats, myself and my cat, so, with things in order- on the sofa we sat. The kids so cute a smile I had to hide, little ones I wished to embrace; then, as it got darker things got a bit scary, and with advancing footsteps I became wary. Grotesque zombies smelled of formaldehyde, was thinking of a hiding place; I could not quit as on the door they would just bang, a pale, red-eyed bloodless Dracula- my name sang. Each new banging had me quite petrified, the monsters kept up a brisk pace; at midnight hissing was heard and in came a snake, he swayed slivering to me- I woke at daybreak ! __________________________ October 15, 2022 Poetry/Rhyme/Halloween Visitors Copyright Protected, ID 10-1494-594-15 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, 12-16 lines of Scary Halloween Rhyme sponsor, Tania Kitchin, Judged 10/30/2022 Second Place

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Date: 10/31/2022 10:48:00 PM
Constance this is a truly terrifying tale of Halloween! Well done spooky story! Congratulations on your win with this haunted poem! Blessings for All Saints and Souls Day!
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Date: 11/2/2022 8:09:00 AM
Sam, thank you so much for the comment, and congratulations, blessings
Date: 10/31/2022 7:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Constance! :)
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Date: 11/2/2022 8:09:00 AM
Linda, thank you so much for the congratulations, blessings
Date: 10/31/2022 1:50:00 AM
Ah, Constance, a super spooky poem, congratulations.
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Date: 11/2/2022 8:10:00 AM
Terry, thank you so much for the comment and congratulations, blessings
Date: 10/30/2022 8:33:00 PM
Constance this is a truly terrifying tale of Halloween! Well done spooky story! Congratulations on your win with this haunted poem! Blessings for All Souls!
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Date: 11/2/2022 8:10:00 AM
Sam, thank you so much for the comment, compliment and congratulations, blessings
Date: 10/30/2022 5:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Constance. Enjoyed your scary poem.
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Date: 11/2/2022 8:11:00 AM
Mala, thank you so much for the congratulation and compliment, blessings
Date: 10/30/2022 4:42:00 PM
Hah… those trick or treaters don’t knock on my door… I turn out all the lights and hide behind the sofa. Difficult to hide from a dream though. Where’s that gin? Congrats on your win, Constance. Terry
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Date: 11/2/2022 8:12:00 AM
Terry, thank you so much for the fun comment and the congrats, hard to grin when you are dreaming ? blessings
Date: 10/30/2022 4:18:00 PM
Constance, congratulations on your winning placement with your creative and scary poem!
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Date: 11/2/2022 8:13:00 AM
Tania, thank you so much for the inspiration, and the contest, and my placement, the compliment and congratulations, appreciate, blessings
Date: 10/20/2022 5:12:00 PM
Very descriptive poem, Constance. Give me Dracula rather than a snake! LOL! Janice
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Date: 10/21/2022 12:55:00 PM
Janice, thank you so much for the compliment, appreciate, I thought Dracula was an overdone theme so because I find snakes scary and creepy, I made it a snake at the end, blessings
Date: 10/16/2022 2:44:00 PM
that must have been some terrifying dream Constance, gl in the contest, :)
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Date: 10/17/2022 8:43:00 AM
Mystic, thank you so much for the visit and comment, I have a big imagination, and write it, sometimes have nightmares too, and thanks for the encouragement, blessings Constance
Date: 10/15/2022 5:08:00 PM
Relaxed and comfy, 'till I got to that slithering snake! Flowed nicely Constance, enjoyed immensely. Robert
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Date: 10/16/2022 2:10:00 PM
Robert, thank you so much for the visit, yes everything starts nice and cozy until !!!! Thank you for the compliment and happy you enjoyed it, blessings Constance

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