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Halloween Surprise

He (she) was a surreal sight rocking in a huge red chair
beside the old house nearby. The bright orange hair,
painted face, polka dot clown suit, and grinning lips
were ludicrous. I was unnerved by this outrageous gag.

Having given out her one hundredth bag,
Mama said, “Hon, go get the other fifty.”

Inside, there it was, leering and humming;
hovering, staring, its bright, evil eyes glaring.
Emitting a low, guttural noise, it floated towards me.
The rest of the night is a blur.
I never shared my story with anyone.


My adult life is firmly fixed in reality--
no more hovering clowns pursuing me!
The stray synthetic orange hairs I sometimes see
mean nothing. They could have come from—anywhere.


October 10, 2020
entered in Carolyn Devonshire's Halloween Fright Poetry Contest
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Kauffman Avatar
October 16, 2020 at 4:20 PM
Oh wow, Janice. This is a well told suspenseful nightmare on Elm Street. Each detail vividly recalled in "orange" imagery. Well done my friend. Congratulations!
Canerdy Avatar
October 17, 2020 at 6:22 AM
Thanks so much, Sam. Janice
Andresen Avatar
October 16, 2020 at 10:50 AM
- Many are scary - Congratulations on your Halloween poem, Janice :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Canerdy Avatar
October 16, 2020 at 12:48 PM
Thanks so much, Anne-Lise. Janice
Leiser Avatar
October 15, 2020 at 12:27 PM
Creepy, intriguing and perfect for this Halloween fright contest, Janice! Great write and congrats on your win! :)
Canerdy Avatar
October 15, 2020 at 8:02 PM
Thanks so much, Laura, Janice
Fowler Avatar
October 15, 2020 at 11:16 AM
Wonderful story Janice! Congratulations on the win! Linda
Canerdy Avatar
October 15, 2020 at 8:02 PM
Thanks so much, Linda. Janice
Devonshire Avatar
October 15, 2020 at 10:08 AM
A lot of people do seem to be afraid of clowns, Janice. I could really feel your terror in this great Halloween poem! Congratulations on a first-place win! Best wishes, Carolyn
Canerdy Avatar
October 15, 2020 at 8:04 PM
Carolyn, thank you so much for sponsoring and for my win! Janice
Michael Avatar
October 11, 2020 at 8:15 AM
Time appears to change everything or we out grow each phase...Nice one here
Canerdy Avatar
October 11, 2020 at 10:12 AM
Thanks, Arturo. Janice
Leffanta Avatar
October 10, 2020 at 1:10 PM
And that orange hair still haunts Americans today!!!! Aloha! Rico
Canerdy Avatar
October 10, 2020 at 5:59 PM
Oh, you mean Trump. Gee, what did you think of my POEM? LOL! Janice
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