Halloween Moon

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Yalto
Invented by Edward Ibeh:
line 1 to 15: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5 syllables. Centered, no rhyme required.

Halloween is when portals open deep within hell, and darkness shadows spooky shapes cast by lanterns while creepy crawlers mix in with the young trick-or-treaters. But a Halloween Moon makes monsters less scary. (Yalto) 09,30,2019

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Edward Ibeh

Date: 10/24/2019 4:28:00 PM

Such an amazing Yalto with striking imagery, Emile:-) A much-belated congrats on your win!

Emile Pinet
Date: 10/25/2019 8:34:00 AM

Thanks Edward, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.

Elaine Perrin

Date: 10/6/2019 11:45:00 AM

Well done on your lovely yalto poem and congratulations on your win :-) x

Emile Pinet
Date: 10/6/2019 1:22:00 PM

Thanks Elaine, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/6/2019 11:16:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win, Emile :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Emile Pinet
Date: 10/6/2019 1:22:00 PM

Thanks Anne-Lise, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.

Brenda Chiri

Date: 10/5/2019 12:54:00 PM

Congrats on your placement!;)

Emile Pinet
Date: 10/6/2019 8:27:00 AM

Thanks Brenda, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/30/2019 4:32:00 PM

Wow! I like this yalto very much my friend. It is a little off your usual path but so well done like all of your poems Emile.

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/30/2019 5:50:00 PM

Thanks Caren, I always enjoy hearing from you my friend, Emile.