Andrea Dietrich Poet Haiku

Halloween Haiku

Halloween Haiku (the forest recalls)

spirits awaken
orange glow before nightfall. . . .
All Hallow Eve dawns

the forest recalls
screams of caged men burned in fires. . . .
a druid’s dark sky

the lord of the dead
lingers in woods’ memory. . . .
a lone owl’s strange hoot

reaching for moon
black barbed spindly arms outstretched. . . .
The worshiping trees

crescent moon upturned
a faceless pale entity. . . . 
*Sanheim grins down

*Sanheim was the Celtic Lord of the Dead, for whom human
sacrifices were made to make amends for sins of the evil dead.
All Hallow Eve took place the night before their new year, when
Sun was worshiped on the next day.

For PD's HALLOWEEN HAIKU Poetry Contest

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Skat A May 16, 2015 at 12:39 PM yup so good, i want to read more

John Smith November 3, 2011 at 7:02 PM Sanheim grins down at your first place win.

Dr.Ram Mehta October 31, 2011 at 10:00 PM Congratulations on the win with this fine poem, Andrea

George Aul October 31, 2011 at 4:11 PM Congrats on your win - with a grin....... George

Carol Sunshine Brown October 31, 2011 at 8:26 AM Congratulations on your win in P.D's "Halloween Haiku" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

Bob Quigley October 30, 2011 at 10:37 PM Great lines Andrea. Congratulations on your Halloween Haiku win

Edward Ebbs October 30, 2011 at 9:02 PM Congrats! Nicely done... Ed :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 30, 2011 at 7:05 PM Congrats Andrea on your first place win with these stunning Halloween Haikus my friend.. honored to share placement luv.. u were right about C.H. contest entry .. I got chastised..haha..

Gwendolen Song October 30, 2011 at 6:17 PM Yes, I am psychic! You won first! This was a tough cookie to judge, I am sure! Every time I read this one, I come up with a varied image. Very smooth write..your win is DYNO-MITE!! Congrats. HOWLLLL-ing at your upside down crescent-shaped moon. Gwendolen

Poet Destroyer A October 30, 2011 at 2:49 PM ANDREA , congratulations ON YOUR VERY XOOL entry for my HALLOWEEN contest.. have yourself a wonderful Halloween,,;-) p.d.

Jslambert Mister Roboto October 25, 2011 at 11:17 PM Thats one HELLUH STACK a' Haiku ya' got there buddy! Cool as a cucumber in a bowl uh' hot sauce! toodles!

Black Eyed Susan October 24, 2011 at 7:34 AM I really like "black barbed spindlely arms outstretched" what an awesome image! good luck in pd's contest :)

Joe Maverick October 23, 2011 at 3:13 PM Now thats what i call "old fashioned" VALUES Andrea) so pleased to read a true account of halloweens roots:) much to be said for the transforming of your mind i think in this write..all the best in that contest now..!

Gwendolen Song October 21, 2011 at 10:44 AM go back to Totus poem...i left u a comment there. :) U are welcome girl. It's from the heart.

Gwendolen Song October 21, 2011 at 10:25 AM Oh wow....the forest's recollectin of All Hallows Eve is magical mystical and strange. I smell a first place winner here........... whooooot!! I love the image of barbed twig arms worshiping the moon. Gwendolen

Gwendolen Song October 21, 2011 at 10:21 AM Oh Andrea....what a great idea! Let the money sucking slime ballz get what they deserve.....someone pull the rug out from under their lying feet. A very good point. You are right, whatever the fix....it'll be better.

Kash Poet October 15, 2011 at 10:51 PM A creative write.Great entry for the contest Best wishes Andrea....(good information about Sanheim)

Nancy Jones October 15, 2011 at 8:27 PM writin' down to the roots! this is fabulous, Andrea, hope it wins~N

Joyce Johnson October 15, 2011 at 7:28 PM Great haikus Andrea. Good luck. Your condolence card came today. Thank you so much and for all of your kind words for me. I am slowly reviving. Love, Joyce

Poet Destroyer A October 15, 2011 at 6:01 PM ha ha! thank you... i'm listening to that song thriller,,,, by M.Jackson.... it's still my october all time song... take care,..p.d.

Edward Ebbs October 15, 2011 at 5:51 PM Great Poem Andrea!

Russell Sivey October 15, 2011 at 4:26 PM Great Halloween poem Andrea! Gave me an eerie feeling when I read it...just how you intended it I'm sure! Thank you for including the comments that describes who Sanheim was and when All Hallows Eve was back then. Great job!

John Smith October 15, 2011 at 4:25 PM Spooky, great Halloween poem. ' Sanheim' - have to remember that one.

Nette Onclaud October 15, 2011 at 4:19 PM makings of folklore, andie... reallly a splendid, unique one! :) huggs, nette