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Hallowed Eve of the Living Dead

I approach the hallowed eve of the living dead With spooky awareness of impending doom, Accompanied by intense feelings of mortal dread. I can’t get creepy silhouettes out of my head Mirrored in ugly scenes of descending gloom, I approach the hallowed eve of the living dead. Halloween finds me walking toward my bed, Hosts of wretched creatures entering my room Accompanied by intense feelings of mortal dread. Ghouls and goblins are celebrating in red A wedding of witches with a Dracula-like groom I approach the hallowed eve of the living dead. Zombies are snarling, impatient to be fed While an evil, deformed troll escapes a tomb Accompanied by intense feelings of mortal dread. Darkness reveals what has often been said Evil lurks in the open this night, we presume, I approach the hallowed eve of the living dead Accompanied by intense feelings of mortal dread.
THIRD PLACE WINNER Written October 21, 2022 Submitted to “Halloween” Poetry Contest Sponsored by Emile Pinet [Rhymes checked with RhymeZone.com] HONORABLE MENTION "Spooky Spree" Poetry Contest All Poetry November 4, 2022

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Date: 11/30/2022 11:39:00 AM
Congratulations for your win ! :)
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/30/2022 12:05:00 PM
Thank you so much, Heidi, for your read and comment.
Date: 11/30/2022 10:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your lofty win, Milt. Spooky tale indeed. Terry
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/30/2022 11:04:00 AM
Thanks so much, Terry. I take it you are still on the lam?
Date: 11/30/2022 10:36:00 AM
Terrific villanelle Milt. Congratulations on your win! :)
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/30/2022 11:05:00 AM
Thanks so much, Linda. I really enjoyed writing it.
Date: 11/30/2022 9:44:00 AM
Congratulations Milt! Your amazing Villanelle poem,"Hallowed Eve of the Living Dead," has placed "Third" in my Halloween contest. You did very well, for I was strict, yet your poem rose to a podium placing. Excellent writing, my friend, Emile.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/30/2022 11:06:00 AM
Thanks so much, Emile. I know you are strict as a judge, but I always enjoy the challenges of writing for your contest. Again, thanks!
Date: 11/30/2022 9:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your podium place for this excellent Halloween poem.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/30/2022 11:07:00 AM
Thanks, Wendy. I had a fun time writing this one. I'm not much into ghosts, ghouls, and such, but I did really enjoy this.
Date: 10/21/2022 6:52:00 PM
Another Halloween treat from you my friend. Such a fine entry for the contest. I marvelled at your ability to write Milton you make it look easy but truth be told it is a difficult task for most...
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/21/2022 7:45:00 PM
Aw, thanks so much, Michael. You are entirely too kind.
Date: 10/21/2022 3:07:00 PM
Good entry, Milt. Appropriately spooky. Was this inspired by a visit to McDonald’s… it sure sounds like the yobs that gather outside my local Maccy Dees. Good luck in the contest. Terry
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/21/2022 7:45:00 PM
Thanks so much, Terry. Nope, it wasn't inspired by my local McDonalds. Actually, I don't know where the inspiration came from.

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