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Hallow Gourd

Snap my lonely stem and Amputate my denied attachments and Discover the life that drains From an open wound. Oozing to the earth it will Whet the desires of worms, Each wondering why tears Taste so much like pulp From a pale and oddly shaped Pumpkin.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/25/2016 11:41:00 PM
WILL, enjoyed reading your poem, thank you for sharing your thoughts through words. *SKAT*
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Date: 10/31/2009 5:45:00 AM
Congratulations Will on your win in Raul's contest, lovely poem. Pam.
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Date: 10/31/2009 5:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your Win in Rauls' contest, with beautifully penned poem, Will! I love the depth in this piece! Love, Robin
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Date: 10/30/2009 4:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest Will. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/30/2009 4:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Will! This is a great poem! ~Trudy~
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Date: 10/30/2009 2:38:00 PM
Congraulations on your win. This was very creative. Joyce
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Date: 10/30/2009 2:29:00 PM
Congratulations Will on your placement in Raul's contest... interesting piece of poetry.. keep at it... Linda-Marie
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Date: 10/30/2009 12:35:00 PM
Will, congrats on your success in my contest...Raul
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Date: 10/20/2009 7:56:00 AM
Thank you for presenting your wonderful poetry to us today. It was an enjoyable read for me. Thank you Will. Wishing you the best should you decide to enter it in Raul's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/19/2009 1:02:00 PM
Love your orginal thinking in this entry to Raul's contest!! Hope you plan to enter this clever poem! ~ Carrie
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Date: 10/19/2009 11:34:00 AM
Interesting Halloween write. We don't think about cutting the life support from these fruits of the plant do we. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 10/19/2009 10:55:00 AM
I love it!! welcome to the soup, keep sharing!!
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