Halitosis

i’m lonely and can’t understand ~ why my waiting room is never full 

said the psychiatrist to his dentist ~ whom replied you talk such bull


By
David Kavanagh
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Fowler Avatar
December 20, 2023 at 10:38 AM
What fun David! You are spot on with walking/ talking a line of bull...LOL :)
Rodrigues Avatar
October 31, 2023 at 11:38 AM
LOL! I love that the psychiatrist is complaining to his dentist…the dentist the smarter of the two…
Kavanagh  Avatar
October 31, 2023 at 12:27 PM
Indeed Kim, even I know not to try speak when in the dentist chair lol, cheers David
Lane Avatar
October 28, 2023 at 10:58 AM
Sounds like a cock and bull story to me.
Lane Avatar
October 28, 2023 at 11:10 AM
I laughed without the gas
Kavanagh  Avatar
October 28, 2023 at 11:05 AM
Indeed it is Lin, just some thoughts that were going nowhere, but deserved to go somewhere, like nitrous oxide and lithium lol, cheers David
Buhagiar Avatar
October 28, 2023 at 2:15 AM
Loved this, I visit the dentist too regularly. Blessings.
Kavanagh  Avatar
October 28, 2023 at 5:42 AM
Once a year does me, for a deep polish and clean, the psychiatrist I’d visit much more often lol, cheers David
Goldsmith Avatar
October 27, 2023 at 1:59 PM
A creative/fun write. Your dentist  said a mouth full... Haha!!! Have a great day/weekend................
Kavanagh  Avatar
October 27, 2023 at 2:37 PM
Ha! very clever Paula, a mouthful of bad air, I remember you wrote one about washing a mouth out with a bar of soap, yep that could do the trick lol! Cheers David
Anaya Avatar
October 27, 2023 at 10:06 AM
Lol. Expialidocious came to mind, as did Listerine.
Anaya Avatar
October 31, 2023 at 6:30 AM
whether I'm right or weather I'm wrong. Those old homophones get in my way.
Kavanagh  Avatar
October 27, 2023 at 10:36 AM
Heya Anaya! I was unsure weather to put it the other way around, but I said what the hell let the psychiatrist take a little heat for a change, cheers David
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