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Halitosis

i’m lonely and can’t understand ~ why my waiting room is never full 

said the psychiatrist to his dentist ~ whom replied you talk such bull


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David Kavanagh

extended metaphorhumorousperspectivemonoku

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 12/20/2023 10:38:00 AM

What fun David! You are spot on with walking/ talking a line of bull...LOL :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/31/2023 11:38:00 AM

LOL! I love that the psychiatrist is complaining to his dentist…the dentist the smarter of the two…

David Kavanagh
Date: 10/31/2023 12:27:00 PM

Indeed Kim, even I know not to try speak when in the dentist chair lol, cheers David

Lin Lane

Date: 10/28/2023 10:58:00 AM

Sounds like a cock and bull story to me.

Lin Lane
Date: 10/28/2023 11:10:00 AM

I laughed without the gas

David Kavanagh
Date: 10/28/2023 11:05:00 AM

Indeed it is Lin, just some thoughts that were going nowhere, but deserved to go somewhere, like nitrous oxide and lithium lol, cheers David

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/28/2023 2:15:00 AM

Loved this, I visit the dentist too regularly. Blessings.

David Kavanagh
Date: 10/28/2023 5:42:00 AM

Once a year does me, for a deep polish and clean, the psychiatrist I’d visit much more often lol, cheers David

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/27/2023 1:59:00 PM

A creative/fun write. Your dentist said a mouth full... Haha!!! Have a great day/weekend................

David Kavanagh
Date: 10/27/2023 2:37:00 PM

Ha! very clever Paula, a mouthful of bad air, I remember you wrote one about washing a mouth out with a bar of soap, yep that could do the trick lol! Cheers David

I Am Anaya

Date: 10/27/2023 10:06:00 AM

Lol. Expialidocious came to mind, as did Listerine.

I Am Anaya
Date: 10/31/2023 6:30:00 AM

whether I'm right or weather I'm wrong. Those old homophones get in my way.

David Kavanagh
Date: 10/27/2023 10:36:00 AM

Heya Anaya! I was unsure weather to put it the other way around, but I said what the hell let the psychiatrist take a little heat for a change, cheers David

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