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Halfway-Nowhere

Love, is not a moderate image to paint ! I have tread a serene parks walk with colourful abundant trees and beauteous scenes Yet Love : “let me honour those who favour you their forte”! Lustful young love and bitterness in sweet red wine Patience in a white steady car awaiting traffic to mind time Everything coming together , it is my damn fault you are not mine? Frantically screaming in the passages of my life In a motion that is slow they kiss me to complete my life And touch me I fathom inside me caterpillars turn to butterflies Tomorrow im in the hue-less shadows of solitude And love is a ghost Oh it unremorsefully robs me of hope On an isolated bench gazing the starry nights Your identity is a historic illusion of time

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Beata Agustin

Date: 7/7/2025 12:24:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Vivian baloyi
Date: 7/8/2025 3:41:00 AM

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR YOUR POWERFUL WORDS!!!MAY GOD THE MOST HIGH BLESS YOU SO GRACIOUSLY TOO.

Zyrool Gifford

Date: 7/3/2025 7:58:00 AM

Hello Vivian, this is a heartfelt and very touching write. Nicely written. Never give up on hope. keep the fire of hope lit, leave the rest to time, as one day it will become a flame. Have a great day, fellow Poet.

Vivian baloyi
Date: 7/3/2025 8:17:00 AM

Hello Zyrool..this means alot to me considering how Great you are also ..this my very first publish ever since i unconciously started writing poetry at 6th grade , so having such feedback means the world to me . THANK YOU SO MUCH JUST MADE MY DAY , LOOKING FORWARD TO MORE COMMENTS .Have a great day .