Half Past Summer, Two Months Till Fall

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Andrea Dietrich's Half Past Summer, Two Months Till Fall Contest... 19 Jul 2025

How could I ignore the dance of a leaf Cascading with warm summer brushed in gold-- Lovers tasting the quiet of relief A contentment lit amidst north-winds cold… And autumn comes...it's charm and flair too brief!

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Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 7/20/2025 5:02:00 AM

Dear Nette, Reading your lines felt like standing in a sun-drenched meadow just before the chill sneaks back into the air. I think that you capture so perfectly that golden lull between seasons where lovers savor the moment, and even the wind’s edge feels gentle. I sense that it is both romantic and wise. Summer Blessngs, My Dear Nette, Daniel

Dr. Vandana Sharma

Date: 7/20/2025 1:00:00 AM

A hint of autumn in the air!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 7/20/2025 12:09:00 AM

Wow, really loved this one!

Paige Hind

Date: 7/19/2025 9:57:00 PM

So poetic and beautifully written, Nette. I was lost in the fall somewhere, lol :)