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Half Past Summer, Two Months Till Fall

They quickly pass, the waning days more brief, like love once shied beneath a garish moon, expose the truths betrayed by Autumn's thief. Infatuation always ends too soon ~ still tethered to the oak, a hopeful leaf... for Andrea's "Half Past Summer" Contest

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Date: 7/22/2025 1:12:00 PM
Hello Craig, There’s something in the timing of this piece like you caught the light just right at seasonal and emotional thresholds blending into one. It reads like someone who’s lived it, or at least dreamt it enough to know the cost. Tender, resigned, and quietly painful so fitting for POTD. Congrats! Summer Blessings, My Friend, Danie
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Date: 7/22/2025 12:44:00 PM
Congrats on POTD! I liked your take on this. :)
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Date: 7/22/2025 10:44:00 AM
I enjoy reading your poetry, Craig. Congratulations on your POTD honor! Bill
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Date: 7/22/2025 10:10:00 AM
Beautiful, Craig, and a great selection for POTD.
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Date: 7/22/2025 9:55:00 AM
Well deserved honor. Craig. Masterfully written.
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Date: 7/22/2025 9:39:00 AM
A grand Quintain (Sicilian) poem. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/22/2025 9:27:00 AM
' Infatuation always ends too soon. ' So true, Craig. This is comparison to the seasons makes perfect sense. I can't believe it's almost that time of year again. I look forward to cooler temps and vibrant colors. Congratulations my dear friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 7/22/2025 8:50:00 AM
I am so taken by this Craig. Perfect for POTD - Congratulations! :)
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Date: 7/22/2025 7:42:00 AM
wished to read more of your summer! lovely write dear poet. Congratulations on POTD. Cheers!!!
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Date: 7/22/2025 6:17:00 AM
Congrats on POTD!
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Date: 7/22/2025 6:11:00 AM
Craig, congratulations on your POTD honors for this beautiful write!
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Date: 7/22/2025 5:32:00 AM
Dear Craig, a really beautiful write with depth and meaning, so deserving of POTD! Congratulations on POTD! Enjoy your special day! Best, Anne
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Date: 7/22/2025 5:25:00 AM
a bit of melancholy metaphor blowing in the fading breeze. I've read it several times...each time the picture changes.
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Date: 7/22/2025 4:44:00 AM
Nice! Enjoy your special day
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Date: 7/22/2025 3:51:00 AM
Congratulations on receiving poem of the day Craig, for this lovely autumn Quintain… Beryl
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Date: 7/22/2025 3:46:00 AM
Well written contender and a great potd! Congrats
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Date: 7/22/2025 3:39:00 AM
Craig, nicely done. Congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 7/22/2025 3:01:00 AM
returning to congratulate you on your POTD designation. I especially liked the last line = brilliant :-)
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Date: 7/22/2025 2:32:00 AM
- A lovely poem, Craig - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. ... enjoy the day and the summer :) -
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Date: 7/22/2025 12:48:00 AM
Hey, what gives? it’s half past Winter at my place. I guess the earth isn’t flat after all. Congrats big fella on your POTD.
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Date: 7/21/2025 3:12:00 AM
exquisite words...loved "truths betrayed by Autumn's thief" Faving
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Craig Cornish
Date: 7/21/2025 6:36:00 AM
Very kind Sara - thank you!
Date: 7/20/2025 8:21:00 PM
eloquent this cornish brand of blazing unchartered poetic trails...like frost taking the road less travelled!
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Craig Cornish
Date: 7/21/2025 6:35:00 AM
Thanks Nette - those unchartered trails have new surprises?!
Date: 7/20/2025 1:27:00 PM
Especially love those last two lines!
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Craig Cornish
Date: 7/21/2025 6:33:00 AM
Thanks Kim!
Date: 7/20/2025 12:54:00 PM
Alas, infatuation typically ends in a blaze of ne'er forgotten glory. Good one Craig
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Craig Cornish
Date: 7/20/2025 1:06:00 PM
Thomas...indeed - thank you

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