Half Past Summer, Two Months Till Fall

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" Summer's my favorite, I suppose. I am not looking forward to Fall at all" The Poet. Summer, my favorite perhaps. Foam squishes between all my toes. Feet tingle, warm sand, water laps. Summer, my favorite perhaps. The beach in summer, heat enwraps. Summer half over soon it goes. Summer, my favorite perhaps. Foam squishes between all my toes.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/28/2025 11:06:00 AM

Thanks for this cute entry in my contest. I love the beach in summer. Congrats in my contest

I Am Anaya

Date: 7/19/2025 10:00:00 AM

Aye SV, your words do justice to that feeling you get when you reach the shore and toes sink sublimely! Now that's Summer, although it's winter there? Great entry! btw, you have cute toes!

Speaks Volumes
Date: 7/22/2025 8:45:00 PM

You are such a darling to notice goodness in simple things like this poem. Life is full of simple things that go unnoticed. Thank goodness there are appreciative souls like yours Anaya. You are special and I thank you for being you. BTW (I wish my feet and legs looked like that ..lol)