Half Past Summer, Two Months Till Fall

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finally summer arrived with all its charms and promises yet somehow i'm finding myself still waiting for your return appreciation growing mostly for my sacred peace within Submitted on July 17, 2025 for contest HALF PASTSUMMER, TWO MONTHS TILL FALL sponsored by ANDREA DIETRICH

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Bill Baker

Date: 7/17/2025 5:25:00 PM

Nice entry for Andrea's contest, Line. This form is a bit limiting it seems. Have a pleasant weekend, my friend. Bill

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/17/2025 6:29:00 PM

I'm not a fan of long lines but at least there are only three so it's not too hard to read ~

Sara Baker

Date: 7/17/2025 5:07:00 PM

such patience and faith is necessary when waiting. Lovely words and a great contest entry. Have a pleasant evening, Sara

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/17/2025 6:29:00 PM

Thank you very much, Sara ~ most appreciated

Lin Lane

Date: 7/17/2025 1:03:00 PM

To find calm and peace during waiting takes a focused mind and a patient heart. Nicely done, Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/17/2025 1:47:00 PM

Thanks, Lin ~