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Half Past Summer, Two Months Till Fall

finally summer arrived with all its charms and promises
yet somehow i'm finding myself still waiting for your return
appreciation growing mostly for my sacred peace within



AP: Honorable Mention 2025

Submitted on July 17, 2025 for contest HALF PASTSUMMER, TWO MONTHS TILL FALL sponsored by ANDREA DIETRICH  -  RANKED 3RD
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Goldsmith Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 12:56 PM
Congratulations on your win. Your write and picture are perfect. Love Both... Have a blessed day with your win................
Gauthier Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 3:28 PM
Thank you very much Paula for your most appreciated visit and comment ~
Dietrich Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 11:03 AM
This is a heartfelt sijo, Line. Congrats in my contest
Gauthier Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 3:29 PM
Thanks for hosting this contest, Andrea ~ and for the much appreciated 3rd place.
Baker Avatar
July 17, 2025 at 5:25 PM
Nice entry for Andrea's contest, Line. This form is a bit limiting it seems. Have a pleasant weekend, my friend. Bill
Gauthier Avatar
July 17, 2025 at 6:29 PM
I'm not a fan of long lines but at least there are only three so it's not too hard to read ~
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 17, 2025 at 5:07 PM
such patience and faith is necessary when waiting. Lovely words and a great contest entry. Have a pleasant evening, Sara
Gauthier Avatar
July 17, 2025 at 6:29 PM
Thank you very much, Sara ~ most appreciated
Lane Avatar
July 17, 2025 at 1:03 PM
To find calm and peace during waiting takes a focused mind and a patient heart. Nicely done, Line.
Gauthier Avatar
July 17, 2025 at 1:47 PM
Thanks, Lin ~
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