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Half Moons

It’s the curse of the bent over plumber
Those who look say “Oh what a bummer”
It’s so silky and white
It must glow in the night
Hope it tans by the end of summer

©5/5/2023

Copyright © John Lawless | Year Posted 2023

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May 11, 2023 at 7:26 AM

I just loved this one John! Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Linda Alice Fowler

May 7, 2023 at 6:10 PM

Hey John. Too clever. :) Congratulations on your win! :)

May 7, 2023 at 5:28 PM

Congratulations on this one, John.

Andrea Dietrich

May 7, 2023 at 3:56 PM

Great job with your limerick .Really like this one, john. Congrats

Regina Mcintosh

May 7, 2023 at 3:20 PM

So cute. Love it. Congrats and God bless you, Love, Gina

May 7, 2023 at 1:28 PM

John, congratulations on your winning placement with your cute and funny limerick!

May 6, 2023 at 1:19 AM

Absolutely 'hilariarse' John lol - I have a limerick collaboration on called 'Butt Out' i would love it if you joined in :-) hugs Jan xx

May 5, 2023 at 6:29 PM

Hahaha funny and lighthearted, had myself a good chuckle :) cheers

May 5, 2023 at 5:51 PM

You give a whole new meaning to the word “moonshine.“ Great fun to read, John.

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