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Half Moons

It’s the curse of the bent over plumber Those who look say “Oh what a bummer” It’s so silky and white It must glow in the night Hope it tans by the end of summer ©5/5/2023

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Jan Allison

Date: 5/11/2023 7:26:00 AM

I just loved this one John! Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 5/7/2023 6:10:00 PM

Hey John. Too clever. :) Congratulations on your win! :)

Lin Lane

Date: 5/7/2023 5:28:00 PM

Congratulations on this one, John.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/7/2023 3:56:00 PM

Great job with your limerick .Really like this one, john. Congrats

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 5/7/2023 3:20:00 PM

So cute. Love it. Congrats and God bless you, Love, Gina

Tania Kitchin

Date: 5/7/2023 1:28:00 PM

John, congratulations on your winning placement with your cute and funny limerick!

Jan Allison

Date: 5/6/2023 1:19:00 AM

Absolutely 'hilariarse' John lol - I have a limerick collaboration on called 'Butt Out' i would love it if you joined in :-) hugs Jan xx

Hat Bueckert

Date: 5/5/2023 6:29:00 PM

Hahaha funny and lighthearted, had myself a good chuckle :) cheers

Lin Lane

Date: 5/5/2023 5:51:00 PM

You give a whole new meaning to the word “moonshine.“ Great fun to read, John.