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Half a Loaf Is - Forget It

The Johnsons' vacation in Island Bay To get there they drive an awful long way Over hill, over dale Then across dusty trails They check in and get to stay half a day gw limerick June 07, 2022

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Bill Baker

Date: 6/13/2022 4:42:00 PM

Bummer unless they just like driving.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/9/2022 10:20:00 AM

This sums up why I never want to"vacation" anywhere again; I prefer my "stay-cation"

Robert Gorelick

Date: 6/8/2022 7:24:00 PM

I'm sure they'll half a great time, if they don't run out of bread! You are the limerick prince...Robert

Ann Foster

Date: 6/8/2022 3:57:00 PM

Sometimes we go so far to get away, to find we are still in the same place... with ourselves... Great write. Ann

Anne E Sangster - K

Date: 6/8/2022 1:36:00 PM

Lol :-D Love it! Your limerick is just what the doctor ordered. Cheers my friend :-)

L Milton Hankins

Date: 6/8/2022 9:21:00 AM

They could have just as much fun and a longer stay in their local state park, methinks.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/8/2022 7:54:00 PM

Great suggestion, Milt. It's off to the State Park for the Johnsons! :) gw

Jeff Kyser

Date: 6/8/2022 7:30:00 AM

I'm sure that trek gets pretty old; The upside is the bread won't mold...

Mike Gentile

Date: 6/8/2022 6:04:00 AM

I hope that they had the AARP discount!! Happy Wednesday GW!!!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/8/2022 7:54:00 PM

Well, the Johnson's got 'half-off!' lol. Thanks, Mike. Hope all is well. ~ gw

Deb M

Date: 6/8/2022 3:43:00 AM

Ha….a lot of effort for a little time…,cute one GW….Cheers Debx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/8/2022 3:12:00 AM

Cute one. I wonder if they enjoyed the country scenery on the way? I am glad you shared this one. I got a chuckle. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/8/2022 12:42:00 AM

Hope it was worth it lol