Half-hearted

Half-hearted attempts stifle genuine trials Leave onlookers tasting a discharge of bile

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/13/2023 6:45:00 PM

All out attempts rival…

David Fisher

Date: 11/13/2023 5:13:00 PM

This is great, with quite a kick. It's catchy and worth remembering.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/13/2023 6:00:00 PM

A kick and a retch -- Who can kvetch?! Laughter and levity, Gershon

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/13/2023 10:16:00 AM

Another creative write. Keep them coming... Have a wonderful day/week writing away....................

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/13/2023 6:05:00 PM

I'm cooking up a batch of 'Creativity' for you to sample, Paula. Thanks for a nice comment, Gershon