Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Haiku

Notes About The Poem

30.03.2025

Anne-Lise Andresen
Copyright © All Rights Reserved

Spring Haiku 
Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin

3rd place in the contest

- Haiku X 350 - spring awakening -

                                   when trumpets blow spring
                                       petals awaken to life -
                                      crystal stream chuckle

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Christuraj Alex April 9, 2025 at 3:05 AM " crystal stream chuckle" - I can hear the sound, indeed. Congratulations!

thriveni c mysore April 7, 2025 at 8:32 PM Now that is the way of awakening! lovely dear friend, Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!

Nette Onclaud April 6, 2025 at 2:32 PM huge congrats on your fine win, anne...splendid 'ku !

Tom Cunningham April 6, 2025 at 12:22 PM Back with congratulations to you Anne Lise, Hope you have a lovely week ahead. Tom

Andrea Dietrich April 6, 2025 at 10:48 AM Back with my congrats. I adored the chuckling line.

Linda Alice Fowler April 6, 2025 at 8:01 AM Peaceful and serene image Anne-Lise. Congratulations! :)

Tania Kitchin April 6, 2025 at 7:13 AM Anne-Lise, a sweet and creative haiku with a fun last line. Congratulations on your winning placement. - hugs

Margaret Foster April 3, 2025 at 6:38 AM Love the stream chuckle. As children we gathered chuckies ( small white pebbles) from the burn (stream) Thanks for the memory. Anne-Lise. Hugs

Duke Beaufort April 1, 2025 at 10:18 AM Anne-Lise, an amazing image and haiku. Your words really bring pleasure into my life. Smiles and thanks. This is the best mood elevator there is!

Valsa George April 1, 2025 at 3:44 AM So beautiful.... both the image and the haiku. All the best Anne. Love and hugs.

Andrea Dietrich March 31, 2025 at 10:06 PM Really really cute!

CayCay Godwin March 31, 2025 at 5:57 PM Yours is the first I've read that had the proper 3rd line kicker. Well done. Man, oh, man, do I want to walk into that picture. How content I'd be just to breathe surrounded by that nature ... wonder if there's room to build a cabin. CayCay

Jay Narain March 31, 2025 at 10:55 AM Two spring beauties, picture and your poem. Lovely.

Joseph P. DiMino March 31, 2025 at 8:15 AM Wonderful image, and interpretation. Let the trumpets blow! I am ready.

Deb M March 31, 2025 at 3:07 AM How very beautiful Sunshine….both poem and picture! Debx

Victor Buhagiar March 31, 2025 at 2:29 AM You seem to have created a small river. Beautiful. Hugs.

Yann Rolland March 31, 2025 at 1:41 AM so creative and musical, enjoyed your spring " symphony" thanks poet

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh March 31, 2025 at 12:03 AM A joyous spirit of springtime very nicely expressed.

David Crandall March 30, 2025 at 10:54 PM What a happy poem! I love a chuckling crystal stream! If I had a trumpet, I'd blow it, just to see the petals awaken and here it.

Abdullah Alhemaidy March 30, 2025 at 4:44 PM Beautiful lovely crystal smiles!

Karen Jones March 30, 2025 at 1:19 PM Gorgeous imagery and the photo is perfect! Enjoyed!

Mystic Rose Rose March 30, 2025 at 1:14 PM I'm chuckling alongside the river of y our beautiful poem Anne. Eager to see spring in all its glory. I believe its coming soon :)

Oliver Mckeithan March 30, 2025 at 1:03 PM Good one Ann-Lise. Like the picture as well. Good luck in the contest Anne-Lise Andresen March 30, 2025 at 1:09 PM - Thank you for reading and best wishes :) - hugs

Tom Cunningham March 30, 2025 at 12:18 PM Been lovely here today Anne Lise, it's finally here I hope it's in Norway too. Tom Anne-Lise Andresen March 30, 2025 at 12:21 PM - Cold wind today, but sunshine and spring are on the way Tom :) - hugs

Ilene Bauer March 30, 2025 at 10:51 AM Lovely picture and poem, Anne-Lise! Anne-Lise Andresen March 30, 2025 at 12:22 PM - Thank you very much, Ilene :) - hugs