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18.03.2025
Anne-Lise Andresen
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- Haiku X 349 - mulberry and butterflies -

                                             roadside mulberry
                                        nectar attracts butterflies
                                         - there's the goat again
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Jones Avatar
March 27, 2025 at 1:10 AM
lol thanks for the laugh!
Andresen Avatar
March 27, 2025 at 2:05 AM
- Thank you, Karen :) - hugs
Crandall Avatar
March 24, 2025 at 3:41 PM
Wow - I see that goat!
Andresen Avatar
March 27, 2025 at 2:05 AM
- Thank you, David :) - hugs
Allison Avatar
March 21, 2025 at 10:26 AM
ha ha ha i am creased up at the final line especially as i had a goat called Susie lol can relate to it so well - pesky animals at times into mischief! hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
March 21, 2025 at 11:14 AM
- We had a dog named Susie in my childhood :) - hugs
Babcock Avatar
March 20, 2025 at 7:28 PM
A cute picture that made me smile. Enjoyed. love phyl
Andresen Avatar
March 21, 2025 at 11:15 AM
- Thank you, Phyllis :) - hugs
Beaufort Avatar
March 20, 2025 at 7:35 AM
Anne-Lise, this is really funny. It’s a strange and unexpected thing to see. Smiles!!
Andresen Avatar
March 20, 2025 at 8:06 AM
- Thank you, Duke :) - hugs
Jones Avatar
March 20, 2025 at 12:21 AM
Hahaha love it!
Andresen Avatar
March 20, 2025 at 8:05 AM
- Thank you, Karen :) - hugs
Buehler Avatar
March 19, 2025 at 8:18 PM
Cute! I enjoyed this a lot, Anne-Lise. :D
Andresen Avatar
March 20, 2025 at 8:05 AM
- Thank you, Evelyn :) - hugs
Leiser Avatar
March 19, 2025 at 1:31 PM
Love the humor in this brilliant haiku, Anne-Lise! Enjoyed this one! :)
Andresen Avatar
March 20, 2025 at 8:05 AM
- Thank you, Laura :) - hugs
Dietrich Avatar
March 19, 2025 at 12:40 PM
hahaha. the picture says it all!
Andresen Avatar
March 20, 2025 at 8:05 AM
- Thank you, Andrea :) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
March 19, 2025 at 12:18 PM
Wow! I see the goat! Great poem. Love it, Anne-Lise!
Andresen Avatar
March 20, 2025 at 8:04 AM
- Thank you, Kim :) - hugs
Empress Avatar
March 19, 2025 at 10:38 AM
Dear anne lise this is so cute and unique and well written for the prompt! I love your sweet and heartwarming haiku truly!! Best wishes always! Sending you light!
Andresen Avatar
March 20, 2025 at 8:04 AM
- Thank you, Ink :) - hugs
Narain Avatar
March 19, 2025 at 10:08 AM
Nice haiku.
Andresen Avatar
March 20, 2025 at 8:04 AM
- Thank you, Jay :) - hugs
Radice Avatar
March 19, 2025 at 8:51 AM
Smiles a plenty from this Souper Anne-Lise. Nice one. I had to look twice at the photo wondering at first if it was real - or just a kid :) Cheers - Gary
Andresen Avatar
March 20, 2025 at 8:03 AM
- Thank you, Gary :) - hugs
Rodgers Avatar
March 19, 2025 at 5:22 AM
Dear Anne-Lise, You brought a smile to my face this morning with your witty Haiku and I am very appreciative. Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Andresen Avatar
March 19, 2025 at 5:27 AM
- A pleasure to hear... that was my goal, Daniel :) - hugs
Singh Avatar
March 18, 2025 at 9:26 PM
Capturing a rural natural beauty.The presence of the goat is humorous.Very nich.Wish you the best.
Andresen Avatar
March 19, 2025 at 5:08 AM
- Thank you, Akham :) - hugs
Pasovic Avatar
March 18, 2025 at 8:41 PM
where is the poem??
Pasovic Avatar
March 18, 2025 at 8:41 PM
Where is the poem at?? 49hg
DiMino Avatar
March 18, 2025 at 3:48 PM
That's hilarious, delightful! Love it!
Andresen Avatar
March 19, 2025 at 5:07 AM
- Thank you, Joe :))) - hugs
Cunningham Avatar
March 18, 2025 at 1:45 PM
That's proof of the saying, sure footed as a mountain goat lol. Good luck in the contest Anne-Lise. Tom
Andresen Avatar
March 18, 2025 at 1:56 PM
- I just had to ... (certainly no contest topic ... :))) - hugs
Lane Avatar
March 18, 2025 at 12:46 PM
That's worthy of more than laughs. lol Anne-Lise.
Lane Avatar
March 18, 2025 at 1:42 PM
Oh yes, I’m aware. That’s why I was laughing. ;-)
Andresen Avatar
March 18, 2025 at 1:18 PM
- Written for laughs ... + more, Lin :) - hugs
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