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Haiku: What My Eyes See

a stone’s throw rocks rest
ships can’t sail shallow water…
an eye lights the way

Contest: Haiku "WHAT MY EYES SEE"
Sponsor: Annalise Brigham

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/28/2011 10:55:00 AM

Congratulations Virginiaon your well deserved win in the contest " What My Eyes See" sponsored by Annalise Brigham. Love, Carol

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 2/28/2011 9:26:00 AM

Hello Virginia, Beautiful words here, Congratulations on your well deserved win... As Always, Shar

John Freeman

Date: 2/27/2011 3:53:00 PM

So good to see you in the top 5 Virginia! Congratulations on your worthy poems fifth place honored win! Agape, Moses

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/27/2011 3:50:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Ralph Taylor

Date: 2/27/2011 12:32:00 PM

Congrats on a well deserved win, Ginny. Nice going. xxxRalph

Kash Poet

Date: 2/27/2011 11:20:00 AM

Beautiful Haiku here!Congrats Virginia on your win in this contest---kashinath

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/27/2011 8:28:00 AM

I love the idea of the "rocks rest" and the "eye".....so creative and lovely is this!! Congratulations, Virginia!!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/27/2011 8:18:00 AM

That last line of yours sure is very unique-- congrats on your win, Virginia :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/27/2011 7:25:00 AM

Congrats Virginia on your wonderful win in the Haiku contest with another fabulous write my friend.. enjoy your top spot with luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/26/2011 11:11:00 PM

I really like that last line: an eye lights the way. I thought of an eye when I was looking at the picture too (and then used beacon. haha) Congratulation.