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Haiku: What My Eyes See

a stone’s throw rocks rest ships can’t sail shallow water… an eye lights the way Contest: Haiku "WHAT MY EYES SEE" Sponsor: Annalise Brigham

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/28/2011 10:55:00 AM

Congratulations Virginiaon your well deserved win in the contest " What My Eyes See" sponsored by Annalise Brigham. Love, Carol

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 2/28/2011 9:26:00 AM

Hello Virginia, Beautiful words here, Congratulations on your well deserved win... As Always, Shar

John Freeman

Date: 2/27/2011 3:53:00 PM

So good to see you in the top 5 Virginia! Congratulations on your worthy poems fifth place honored win! Agape, Moses

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/27/2011 3:50:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Ralph Taylor

Date: 2/27/2011 12:32:00 PM

Congrats on a well deserved win, Ginny. Nice going. xxxRalph

Kash Poet

Date: 2/27/2011 11:20:00 AM

Beautiful Haiku here!Congrats Virginia on your win in this contest---kashinath

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/27/2011 8:28:00 AM

I love the idea of the "rocks rest" and the "eye".....so creative and lovely is this!! Congratulations, Virginia!!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/27/2011 8:18:00 AM

That last line of yours sure is very unique-- congrats on your win, Virginia :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/27/2011 7:25:00 AM

Congrats Virginia on your wonderful win in the Haiku contest with another fabulous write my friend.. enjoy your top spot with luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/26/2011 11:11:00 PM

I really like that last line: an eye lights the way. I thought of an eye when I was looking at the picture too (and then used beacon. haha) Congratulation.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 2/26/2011 9:41:00 PM

Nice well done haiku. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/26/2011 8:43:00 PM

Congratulations on your very fine win in my contest, Virginia. And thanks for the suppport. Always, Annalise

Constance La France

Date: 2/25/2011 5:00:00 AM

An "impressive" haiku you have penned for the contest, best of luck~~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/23/2011 10:59:00 PM

I really like how you did yours, virginia. May it do well in the contest!

Date: 2/23/2011 11:24:00 AM

Nice use of alliteration and imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Karen

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/23/2011 7:35:00 AM

Nice interpretation of the picture, Goodluck, Virginia

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/23/2011 7:18:00 AM

Virginia, this looks like a good one for Annalise's contest.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/23/2011 5:31:00 AM

Awesome write Virginia depicting the photo for the contest.. good luck with luv for a dynamic entry ..